The Lunch Pail

He left for work, lunch pail in hand – a warm kiss on the cheek at the door. His arms wrapped me in a big, bear hug – he promised he’d be home at four. The feel of his embrace as a warm cocoon – made me happy to be alive. The sound of his tires on the gravel – as he slowly pulled out of the drive. My father was my inspiration - like a tissue for all of my tears. As long as I had my pappy - I felt cushioned from pain and fear. The school day went by quickly – a blanket of white outside. I stuck my tongue out to taste the snow – and the cold melted warm as pie. Stunned by the silence of an empty house – an indication of something gone wrong. A tremble of fear like a chill in the air – the startling message on the phone. My father would not be home at four – his heart gave out on the job. He was breathing artificial life - my own heart began to throb. I tasted tears all through the night - my pulsing heart in shock. I watched the passing of the moon - like a total eclipse of the clock. The piercing sound of the ringing phone – at precisely half past six. I heard my mother fall to the floor – the shock of a loss too big. It was March of 1976 and the lunch pail sat alone – I would never again hear the sound of his tires. He was never coming home.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 3/4/2012 9:41:00 AM
this is heart-breaking! you've described your relationship with your father so well and i love the title and the focus on the lunch pail. a beautiful poem!
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Patti Downey
Date: 3/7/2012 9:49:00 PM
Thank you so much, Ilene. It's funny how after all this time, it still seems like it just happened yesterday. I really appreciate your kind words.
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