The Lucky One

Ah those trips along the Murray River, 
taking Tommy the dog for his stroll
is a blessing for Gary and me,
and really quite good for the soul.

And some days we pick up a friend,
whose knowledge is not at a loss,
so conversing is high; at a premium,
when having a day out with Ross.

We learn quite a lot on these trips,
amid language that can be very strong,
but we always feel we are lucky,
on days when Ross does come along.

Of course I should mention also,
those days we go imposing upon,
a young fellow who lives on his own
in his mansion and his name is Don.

We talk about growing our gardens,
the folk club and days of the tafe,
but there is no mention of football.
And girls of the Mallee are safe. 

But soon as Don mentioned a drawing
he entered in the Wentworth show,
both Gary and I then suggested
the show is the place we should go.

Don’s drawing is three lovely women,
belly dancing and clothing is sparse.
Don is surely the absolute winner.
Coming second will be quite a farce. 

And so before the declaration,
we used the spare time for a view
of the offerings here at the show,
then we met a young lady we knew.

Melissa is a woman strong willed,
determined with ambition and drive, 
insisting on everything her way.
Last birthday she turned forty-five.

And Gary with the wit that he has
insisted Don’s seeking a  bride,
and Don then responded to Gary,
that Melissa is who should decide.

While debating their fate with Melissa,
no answer would ever be clear,
then with luck I had noticed a sign -
‘fortune teller - please enter in here.’

And I’m sure that this woman of note,
will declare when she acts upon
the facts once they’re laid on the table -
will Melissa choose Gary or Don?

Now Melissa sat first at the table.
(at this point she’s enjoying the fun)
“Two men want to make me their bride,
tell me - who will be the lucky one?”

The fortune-teller took Melissa’s hand.
With a smile her answer begun,
“Melissa - Don here will marry you,
and Gary will be the lucky one.”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 10/29/2018 4:25:00 PM
Gosh I want to know you.. your humor pulls me close!!
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 11/8/2018 6:10:00 PM
Hello Lyric Man … thanks for reading this piece of silliness. You might regret your statement, but I'd like to think not - Lindsay
Date: 10/11/2018 6:30:00 AM
G'day Lindsay, this is a fav for me. The last line was "perfect" lol. I was always afraid to sit beside a fortune teller, I'd rather be surprised of my fate...blessings my dear friend and mate...Charlie
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 10/28/2018 2:28:00 AM
Hello Charles ... thanks Mate for your comment. The one thing a fortune doesn't tell you - your bank balance will be lighter - Lindsay
Date: 10/5/2018 5:55:00 PM
Another winner! Well done! Aloha! Rico
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 10/9/2018 10:49:00 PM
G'day Rico … But who is the real winner here Rico. The future holds the answer, and who do you go and see to predict your future? thanks Mate - Lindsay
Date: 10/5/2018 3:52:00 AM
Ooh, that last line made me laugh hard. Great ending and a joy to read.
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Date: 10/9/2018 10:47:00 PM
Hello M. L. … I'm pleased that this tale also gave you a giggle. You could almost call it bad luck or the great escape for all parties - thanks again - Lindsay
Date: 10/5/2018 12:45:00 AM
Just too funny. I’ve been married a long time and it’s not entirely a picnic every day. This is life at its best.
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Date: 10/9/2018 10:45:00 PM
G'day Duke … like everything over a long period of time; there are highs and lows, and in this piece of silliness perhaps a great escape - thanks Duke - Lindsay
Date: 10/4/2018 11:49:00 PM
Love the ending Lindsay, everyone a winner. You are great at humour. Tom
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Date: 10/9/2018 10:43:00 PM
G'day Tom … it's interesting to wonder if this palm reading got it right. Time will tell - thanks Tom - Lindsay
Date: 10/4/2018 10:13:00 PM
I really like this 'Aussie' Story, Lindsay...am guessing your origin 'cuz I'm an old rangslinger (lefty) who owns an old (1979) lefty hook made by the "Murray River Man" Jackie Byham...the "real" Crocodile Dundee...& Wycheproof B's by Bunny Read's Daughter Leanne...
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Date: 10/9/2018 10:41:00 PM
G'day James … yeah, we lived on the Murray at Mildura for 20 years, and been in Wycheproof many times where the train divides the main street. Gotta watch those Crocodile Dundee type; they know how to turn a tall story into truth - thanks James - Lindsay
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