The Luckiest In the Land

Once I thought that two-year olds’ 
were the luckiest in the land

To not know that ahead of them
 their future would demand

But realized I had had that chance
 and still my future come

That maybe just the two-year olds 
weren’t quite as lucky as some

Now then, I thought, the elderly 
are luckier still than I

To reminisce about their past 
as in their beds they lie

And yet to be a part of it, 
not simply thinking back

Would probably be preferable
to never doing jack

And so, thought I, just where I am, 
simply at eighteen

Not at the start, nor at the end
merely in between

Must be the spot, the pinnacle
of life on which to stand

So that, you see, I’ll truly be 
the luckiest in the land
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Raynes Avatar
September 17, 2016 at 11:09 PM
Loved the symmetry in ur beautiful write Sam. Congratulations on ur win.
Farley Avatar
September 22, 2016 at 4:18 PM
Thanks.
DiMino Avatar
August 25, 2016 at 9:39 AM
Perfect! Love it!
Farley Avatar
September 22, 2016 at 4:18 PM
Thank you
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