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The Luckiest Bird Around

Shake from a nightmare; Farmer sharping his cleaver. To freezer, he went; T-bone for Thanksgiving feast. Boasting round, ruffling my wings. 11/10/2021 Soup being down screwed my tanka to a one liner... how upsetting...

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Date: 11/22/2021 12:00:00 AM
A great poem for this week.Happy Thanksgivings Eve!
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Date: 11/12/2021 8:40:00 AM
Interesting angle! I suppose the freezer -- suspended death, so to speak, beats having one's head amputated. ~ Tho I wouldn't know lol.
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Date: 11/12/2021 5:38:00 AM
Golly,, your tanka was beheaded. Sheesh! Got a kick out of your poem.Eve. I hope to be home by Thanksgiving “ this is the day, the Lord made, let us rejoice and be glad in it. Panagiota
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Date: 11/11/2021 8:45:00 PM
Beautiful tanka. The turkey was fortunate. I thoroughly enjoyed your lucky bird poem.
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Date: 11/11/2021 4:13:00 PM
lol...enjoyed your lucky bird poem indeed
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Date: 11/11/2021 1:20:00 AM
Lovely tanka. I haven't eaten a T-bone for ages.
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Date: 11/10/2021 5:40:00 PM
Hello Eve roper, I would say the turkey got lucky. Steak is just as good. Enjoy your evening my friend. Hugs.
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