The Lowly Turnip

The lowly turnip
Earthy, fleshy
Roots falling from its eyes
Fed to  livestock
One of God’s root crops
Yet deemed  untasty
By most palates 

Carrots and potatoes
Receive accolades
Carrots in orange party dress
So crunchy and sweet 
Fit in the school child’s lunch box
Potatoes in russet  brown
Mashed, fried and frittered
Prized alongside McDonalds and Kentucky Fried

Do not despair, my friend, 
Not all root crops
Are valued similarly
Said the rutabaga disparagingly
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Drowley Avatar
November 15, 2018 at 2:42 PM
Kathleen, Thank you for caring or the lowly turnip! The lowest should never be ignored. After all, the eye needs the foot to get around.
Gist Avatar
August 9, 2018 at 3:15 PM
I like turnips! Nice work.
Coulstock Avatar
June 28, 2018 at 5:44 PM
I love your turn of phrase.I almost feel sorry for the poor turnip - I don’t like it much either- but I love this write especially “Carrots in orange party dress”.You’ve almost humanised them to eat some would seem almost cannibalistic.Thanks for making me smile.
Kroll Avatar
June 28, 2018 at 6:15 PM
It's fun to do something light occasionally. Glad you like it. Thanks for visiting. Keep writing.. Kathy
Ellison Avatar
June 27, 2018 at 4:43 PM
Love ALL vegetables... rutabagas, parsnips, spinach, you name em... I love rooty ones too!!! Great tribute to the earthy foods!!! LOL
Kroll Avatar
June 27, 2018 at 5:12 PM
Thanks, Jack. It was a fun one to write. We all need more lightness and whimsey in our lives -
Schiavina Avatar
November 13, 2017 at 9:34 AM
Very funny and so down to earth. Well done.
Bhattacharya Avatar
September 13, 2016 at 2:03 AM
Very funny theme.. I loved it, Kathleen.
Kroll Avatar
September 13, 2016 at 9:38 AM
Thanks, Saran! Appreciate your comment. Kathy
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 27, 2016 at 4:21 AM
The turnip is my lovely low cal potato. We only get them here in the stores at Christmas time Kathleen. I love the taste. Loved your little tribute poem to them. ; )
Dietrich Avatar
May 27, 2016 at 8:51 PM
sadly, do not love the turnip.
Dietrich Avatar
May 27, 2016 at 8:50 PM
I just LOVE this one. And here is a root veggie I recently have grown accustomed to which is so much healthier for me than the brown potato: PARSNIPS. I love them and I love this poem. FAVE
Kroll Avatar
May 29, 2016 at 1:51 PM
Thanks, Andrea. Hoping the muse for that one will visit me again soon. Actually, I'm not fond of turnips or parsnips and even the word rutabaga doesn't sound too appealing...
Allison Avatar
April 28, 2016 at 2:19 AM
made me smile Kathleen - they are not my favourite veg but mashed up with some carrot and butter mmmmm :-) hugs jan xx love the line about the carrot in her party dress sure made me smile:-) hugs Jan xx7
Kroll Avatar
April 28, 2016 at 9:51 AM
Thx, Jan. It was so much fun to write. Actually done on a dare. Appreciate your comments!!
Amadore Avatar
April 27, 2016 at 8:56 PM
Yes! Cheer up turnips; you are among MY favorites!
Kroll Avatar
April 28, 2016 at 9:53 AM
Interesting!! Thx for your comment. Kathy
Walker Avatar
April 27, 2016 at 8:30 PM
Kathleen, your poem is whimsical. Enjoyed the read. All the best, Sonia Walker.
Kroll Avatar
April 27, 2016 at 8:42 PM
Thanks, Sonia.
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