Premiere Contest WinnerThe Loving Sound-Collab

I enjoy being in tune with nature,
As I sit, I hear such a loving sound.
Reminded of God, our legislature.
From this small hill, I hear him all around.

Melodies of life flow through nature's core,
Floating towards the one who sits on high.
I heard soft notes as the tide came to shore.
And I can sense his divine presence nigh.

                    Joanna Daniel's part

I enjoy this harmony with nature,
Feeling close to God, as He calls me out,
Each sound reveals His loving portraiture,
He's alive in nature, there is no doubt.

Songs of praise spark my pen, as I listen
To birds chirruping in satisfaction.
A thousand rays on the ocean glisten.
Grateful am I for His benefaction.



03/23/2023
Rhyme Scheme: abab
Contest: Collaborate With Me
Sponsor: Joanna Daniel
Syllable: 10/10/10/10/10/10/10/10
Rhyme Scheme: abab/abab
Theme: Nature
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Dietrich Avatar
April 2, 2023 at 12:47 PM
Ha I was right! Congrats
Agustin Avatar
March 30, 2023 at 8:48 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... delightful and delighting from the start 'til the end--- even with Jo's collaborating stanzas. God bless you.
Turner Avatar
March 30, 2023 at 8:34 AM
Congratulations Alexis on your podium write. A wonderful collabopration.
Leiser Avatar
March 30, 2023 at 8:14 AM
What a lovely poem, Alexis! Congratulations on your trophy win! :)
Fowler Avatar
March 30, 2023 at 7:32 AM
Congrats on your win with this fab poem Alexis! :)
Seeker Avatar
March 30, 2023 at 6:59 AM
Superb trophy win, Alexis! Warmest congratulations!
George Avatar
March 30, 2023 at 6:46 AM
Indeed a lovely poem, so spiritual in tone. Congratulations Alexis on your trophy win
Daniel Avatar
March 30, 2023 at 6:19 AM
Hi Alexis, congratulations on your trophy win, it was a great poem right from the start and wonderful collaborating with you:)
Y. Avatar
March 30, 2023 at 6:47 AM
Hi Jo, I'm glad you liked it.You held a good contest. I appreciate my placement in your contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis
Dietrich Avatar
March 29, 2023 at 11:52 AM
I think you have a good chance to be chosen . If I were the judge , I'd be looking for ones easy to respond back to, and this one has that quality
Edmonds  Avatar
March 26, 2023 at 3:34 PM
Alexis this is beautiful and it would be a lovely collaboration to do. Belle
Rodrigues Avatar
March 24, 2023 at 12:45 PM
Curling up with you for the imagery is divine! God bless you, Alexis!
McBride  Avatar
March 23, 2023 at 8:44 PM
Amen embrace all the beauty around us,. Love your poem of peace, love and beauty around us that so many miss.
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