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The Loving Cage

The sheen is off the gardens ,so has the dullness befallen, while summer's may come and go, the stars may appear and disappear, I may turn grey and white ,you may cease to fascinate any longer, but be thankful to the seeds sown in the youthful summer, when others were busy in making castles of gold and diamond, you choose love, now the autumn has set in , things may wither to nothingness, but don't you worry my darling, love has no age....... Naseerrrr ~

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Date: 2/20/2016 1:13:00 PM
er, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 12/20/2015 1:35:00 PM
ER NASEER, stopped by to enjoy some of the best poems and poets of 2010 - 1015 :) Hope you are well enjoying what is left of 2015. Sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year. Good luck in all you do during 2016. ~SKAT LOVE~
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Er.Naseer Ahmad
Date: 12/24/2015 3:21:00 AM
Thank you SKAT LOVE ... happy Christmas and mirthful 2016 for you. Let love fill us inside out... Good luck..
Date: 11/17/2015 10:02:00 AM
Its a beautiful poem..When one works hard for love all throughout many years.That love will last mmuch longer than anything else.Yes love knows no age.Fantastic.Welcone to p.s Ahmad. : )Charma.
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Er.Naseer Ahmad
Date: 11/19/2015 2:24:00 AM
Thanks charmaine Love has no start nor end love is the permanence rest all fade out.... Thank you for all the generosity. ...

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