Shadow Hamilton Poet Villanelle

The Lovers

They came together in passion
their love was without ration
it was so full of loving tension

Their love was one in a million
they shared only one vision
they came together in passion

They walked together in union
as if they had taken a potion
it was so full of loving tension

Dreams shared without ration
together they shared a cushion
they came together in passion

No bars here, just love's prison
their love they did not question
it was so full of loving tension

They shared just one notion
to always love with no ration
they came together in passion
it was so full of loving tension

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written 05/19/2013

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Andrea Dietrich May 20, 2015 at 8:16 PM Nice one, shadow. I see all the ones you told me to read are from May of 2013. I have a little time to see at least two of them right now. Let me check out one more. Shadow Hamilton May 22, 2015 at 7:01 PM ty Andrea you have read so many I thought it best to go back to first poems on here lol hugs

Richard Lamoureux January 28, 2014 at 7:24 AM I missed this one before, I will answer your question by soup.

Anne-Lise Andresen August 11, 2013 at 11:03 AM - Congratulations on having your poem featured on the homepage "Featured Poem of the Week" - Have a nice day, Shadow. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Shadow Hamilton August 11, 2013 at 7:16 PM hi Anne Lise Ty i am happy you enjoyed Ty for reading Shadow x smiles

Poet Destroyer A August 11, 2013 at 7:13 AM Shadow, , '''CONGRATULATIONS''' On your featured poem of the week... Have yourself a nice and beautiful Sunday... -XOX- Love Linda Shadow Hamilton August 11, 2013 at 7:17 PM Ty Linda its one of my own favs so very pls enjoy the rest of sunday Ty for reading Shadow x smiles

Andrea Travis August 7, 2013 at 10:52 AM Awesome write! I am discovering the villanelle and love them. Truly enjoyed your work! Shadow Hamilton August 7, 2013 at 4:39 PM hi Andrea and ty its an exacting form to write in I enjoy using it. Gl with it shadow x smiles

Mustapha Mohammed June 7, 2013 at 3:29 PM Lovely poem dear Linda,I think I read this one from you already. Shadow Hamilton August 7, 2013 at 4:34 PM yes you have dearest friend was one of my early posts on here ty for reading again love Shadow x smiles

Seren Roberts May 26, 2013 at 12:13 PM Linda, again you write a winner, congrats...Seren Shadow Hamilton May 26, 2013 at 5:06 PM hi Seren ty I appreciate your feedback Linda

Seosamh De Burca May 25, 2013 at 4:16 PM Congrats Linda on your winning poem, I really enjoyed it. Shadow Hamilton May 25, 2013 at 4:40 PM ty very much Seosamh nice to know you liked it Linda

Connie Gildersleeve May 24, 2013 at 7:12 PM Enjoyed this love poem. Congratulations on your well deserve win. Warm Smiles, Connie Shadow Hamilton May 25, 2013 at 4:23 AM Connie hi ty happy you enjoyed it tnx for congrats Linda

Debbie Guzzi May 24, 2013 at 3:52 PM Wonderful love story! Congrad's on your win, Light & Love Shadow Hamilton May 24, 2013 at 4:12 PM ty Debbie much appreciated happy you enjoyed Linda

Colleen Bono May 24, 2013 at 1:23 PM congrats on your well deserved win.take care Shadow Hamilton May 24, 2013 at 2:50 PM hi Colleen much appreciated ty you too

Poet Destroyer A May 23, 2013 at 10:33 PM wow Linda, you are amazing, new and already a new favorite poet. I am happy to see another one of your poems hit a number #1.... Congratulations... xox~ Linda Shadow Hamilton May 24, 2013 at 11:27 AM ty Linda nah just me I seem to think slightly out of the box lol luck people seem to like it ty for your continued support Linda

Len Gasun May 23, 2013 at 9:14 PM Big heartfelt congratulations on your SUPER WIN on this incredibly beautiful & romantic write my dear friend Linda! I enjoyed reading your poem! Thank you so much for sharing! love and big hugs, Leonora Shadow Hamilton May 24, 2013 at 11:28 AM ty for reading I am very happy you enjoyed it ty Linda

Joseph May May 23, 2013 at 7:59 PM congrats on your top win with this wonderful villanelle Linda Shadow Hamilton May 24, 2013 at 11:31 AM ty Joseph I was surprised I am new to villanelles Linda

Joyce Johnson May 23, 2013 at 7:54 PM Lovely villanelle, lovely win.Congratulations Shadow Hamilton May 23, 2013 at 8:27 PM ty it was my first attempt at this style the parrots is my 2nd so glad its liked

Honestly J.T. May 23, 2013 at 7:46 PM Congrats on your win - JH Shadow Hamilton May 23, 2013 at 8:25 PM hi JH ty you kindly much appreciated Linda

Carrie Richards May 23, 2013 at 7:35 PM Congratulations on this unique twist to the contest! Shadow Hamilton May 23, 2013 at 8:24 PM hi Carrie ty I was amazed I won Linda

Kim Morrison May 23, 2013 at 6:00 PM Loved the flow and the content of your poem Linda. Congrats on winning my contest. Kim Shadow Hamilton May 23, 2013 at 6:26 PM hi Kim wow I wasn't expecting that ty so much that was the 1st villanelle I wrote and to win is incredible ty Linda

Poet Destroyer A May 19, 2013 at 3:34 PM Linda, love and it's many themes. love one in a million... enjoyed~ Linda Shadow Hamilton May 23, 2013 at 6:27 PM ty Linda amazed it won