The Lovers

Silver butterflies fell from his mouth
when he spoke her name
and away they fluttered
through the pink afternoon
and circled the maiden 
who slept beneath the willow
through her raven hair they laced
while in dreams she met him
as through the blaze of sunset they rode..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
November 10, 2010 at 9:08 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Valerie. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol
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September 24, 2010 at 11:21 AM
Am thrilled to have my poem featured and thank you all so much for your kind comments.. I need to get back to writing and reading some of the wonderful poetry on here.
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September 23, 2010 at 10:11 PM
Valerie, Congratulations! On having your poem featured this week. A poem well deserved, keep the fascinating poetry coming" Nathan D.
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September 23, 2010 at 11:05 AM
Valerie, CONGRATULATIONS on your wonderful poem being featured this week. Enjoyed the selection of all the poetry on the front page. Have yourself a nice and wonderful day,..p.d.
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September 23, 2010 at 6:37 AM
gorgeous imagery! so enjoyed reading this:)
Thomer Avatar
September 22, 2010 at 6:06 PM
what a beautiful piece, very visual and sensational. thank you for sharing and congratulations on being featured this week. :) --Madison
Austin Avatar
September 22, 2010 at 7:20 AM
I like the duple image here. Congrats on the selection. Dave
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September 21, 2010 at 3:45 PM
Thank you all for your kind comments...
Brown Avatar
September 21, 2010 at 11:03 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week at PoetrySoup Valerie. Love, Carol
Kendrick Avatar
September 20, 2010 at 11:09 AM
Great write that is featured this week on homepage...I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Sara
Kendrick Avatar
September 20, 2010 at 11:08 AM
Great write that is featured this week on homepage...I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Sara
Thandie Avatar
September 20, 2010 at 6:30 AM
Nice work, short but filled with so much. Loved it!
Hilliker Avatar
May 1, 2010 at 8:29 PM
Nicely romantic. Thanks for sharing.
Brown Avatar
April 20, 2010 at 5:49 AM
I enjoyed reading the poetry you presented to us today Valerie. It has been some time since your last post. Thank you for sharing it and may you have a day full of love and inspiration. Love, Carol
Kendrick Avatar
April 19, 2010 at 11:42 AM
Wow what a dream...Keep the imagination flowing...Sara
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