The Lovely Women From France

The Lovely Women From France

The closest he got to France is from a broad
She said if he saw her home, he would be awed
Now their first date was just  fine
And yes he swallowed that line
Until she stoked the Effiel Tower's facade 

connie pachecho 

1/26/23
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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January 25, 2023 at 11:15 PM
Who is "he" and who is "she".Without details the reader is not engaged
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