Alexis Y. Poet Pantoum

The Lovely Beach

As we took a stroll on the lovely beach 
Your kisses took me by total surprise 
I a student and you had something to teach
It was pure joy as we beheld the beautiful sunrise

Your kisses took me by total surprise
My darling I’ve never known a love like this
It was pure joy as we beheld the beautiful sunrise
And I want you to know, I now know it exists

My darling I’ve never known a love like this
I’m confident we’ll have blissful tomorrows
I want you to know, I know it exists
Our days will not be filled with many sorrows

I’m confident we’ll have blissfully tomorrows
I a student and you had something teach
Our days will not be filled with many sorrows
As we took a stroll on the lovely beach


6-6-17

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Susan Ashley September 6, 2017 at 9:08 PM Hi Alexis, I love pantoums, (my page has quite a few), and I love your beautifully expressed, romantic poem! Excellent content, rhyme and rhythm, a total joy to read. Thank you for commenting so kindly on my poem 'Dancing Eye Candy'. :)

Afzal Nusker July 21, 2017 at 1:07 AM Lovely poem. I like this thought of teacher & student very much.

Freddie Robinson Jr. June 9, 2017 at 12:38 PM A very elegantly written poem, Alexis. Like WW said, pantoums are a difficult form to write. Your's was an excellent poem however. Love always.

White Wolf June 6, 2017 at 2:07 PM A hard form to tackle, you have done very well, Alexis!

Jan Allison June 6, 2017 at 11:27 AM aww Alexis this is so lovely and romantic I do love the pantoum form it is quite a challenge to write:-) hugs Jan xx

Chris Green June 6, 2017 at 9:35 AM Really nicely done Alexis. A beautiful love poem written is such a difficult form, but it all just melds together so smoothly. Loved this one.

Heidi Sands June 6, 2017 at 9:31 AM So nice Alexis! Very sweet :)