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The Lovely Beach

As we took a stroll on the lovely beach Your kisses took me by total surprise I a student and you had something to teach It was pure joy as we beheld the beautiful sunrise Your kisses took me by total surprise My darling I’ve never known a love like this It was pure joy as we beheld the beautiful sunrise And I want you to know, I now know it exists My darling I’ve never known a love like this I’m confident we’ll have blissful tomorrows I want you to know, I know it exists Our days will not be filled with many sorrows I’m confident we’ll have blissfully tomorrows I a student and you had something teach Our days will not be filled with many sorrows As we took a stroll on the lovely beach 6-6-17

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Date: 9/6/2017 9:08:00 PM
Hi Alexis, I love pantoums, (my page has quite a few), and I love your beautifully expressed, romantic poem! Excellent content, rhyme and rhythm, a total joy to read. Thank you for commenting so kindly on my poem 'Dancing Eye Candy'. :)
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Date: 7/21/2017 1:07:00 AM
Lovely poem. I like this thought of teacher & student very much.
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Date: 6/9/2017 12:38:00 PM
A very elegantly written poem, Alexis. Like WW said, pantoums are a difficult form to write. Your's was an excellent poem however. Love always.
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Date: 6/6/2017 2:07:00 PM
A hard form to tackle, you have done very well, Alexis!
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Date: 6/6/2017 11:27:00 AM
aww Alexis this is so lovely and romantic I do love the pantoum form it is quite a challenge to write:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/6/2017 9:35:00 AM
Really nicely done Alexis. A beautiful love poem written is such a difficult form, but it all just melds together so smoothly. Loved this one.
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Date: 6/6/2017 9:31:00 AM
So nice Alexis! Very sweet :)
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