The Love Story of Kacha and Devayani- 6

NOTE: Sorry that in spite of my best 3-4 attempts the Poetry lines are breaking while placing the Poem. I have no idea why it is happening every time I delete and repost the poem. Ravindra K Kapoor 11th Aug. 2014 The Love Story of Kacha And Devayani Devayani Stanza 16 continues And behind those Sarkanda* furs, We often used to get lost , In watching the endless mounts, Of silver sands, Shinning in the love drops of Moon, With the patches, Of white dancing furs, Scattered here and there, On them, In those intoxicating Moonlights, They all seems to be dancing, On the rhythmic flow, Of the fast blowing winds. 16 And do you remember Kacha, How often you, Used to tell me, That those fur plants, Appears to be inviting us, To go to them, To join, In their splendid Moonlight Dance, To become one with them. 17 Watching that shining silver sands, Of the calm and cool moonlights, And charmed by the sleeping beauty, Of Mother Nature, And its creatures, Can you recollect, Those melody moments, Which comes very seldom, In our life time.18 The echoes of those melodies, In your soothing voice, Still haunts me, Whenever the images, Of our togetherness, Flashes in any corner, Of my mind and heart, And now when you want, To leave this place, Forever, Can you tell, Why it is happening with me, And not with you, Dear Kacha. 19 Kacha Those beautiful moments, Are the greatest treasure, Of my sweet stay with you, Dear Devayani, And such splendid moments, Always live and bloom in our, Mind and heart, To give us the same joy and pleasure, When we cannot create them. 20 It is almost impossible, To recreate such, Splendid and lofty moments, Devayani, They come and go, Like the changing seasons, As life keep moving, With the change of time, Even when they come again, It is not the same, What you have imprinted, On the canvas, Of your mind and heart. 21 Ravindra Kanpur India 11th Aug. 2014 To continue in next …… Protected under the Copyright provisions of Poetry Soup. Ravindra K Kapoor NOTE : To know the background of this story please read Part 1. * Sarkanda - Munj Sweetcane
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Date: 8/11/2014 5:49:00 PM
Yes, the moments of wonder come and go and often cannot be replicated. Maybe NEVER can be exactly the same again. I enjoyed how you used much imagery in this one!!
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Date: 8/11/2014 5:47:00 PM
How lovely what you wrote about LInda!!!
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Date: 8/11/2014 12:03:00 AM
While placing this Part 6 of my series Epic Poem the memories of my dear friend Linda Marie flashes again and again in my mind. Her comments on my Poem and even on the Poems of others were more of an inspiration then the review of that Poem. We really miss you a lot dear friend Linda Marie. Hope the story would continue to keep your binding interest in this lovely story of Kacha and Devayani.
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