The Love Step

       Two dancers
           embrace on destiny’s floor.
       Their dance
           started in youth
           moves them apart
           into other arms.
       Their music
           carries the message;
           they are still in step
           to be united again
           and end rehearsal
           for the next dance.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Sparrow Avatar
July 8, 2023 at 6:43 PM
This tender piece makes me think of fate and how we almost don't have a choice about whom we love in this life. If it is meant to be, it seems it will happen! A couple dancing is perhaps the best metaphor for this phenomenon, well done.
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace