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The Love of You - a Collaboration With Deb Wilson

As I compose these rhymes, I've been contemplating on what to do. Because there are times I've been debating if this is real what I feel for you! I'm utterly amazed by the amount of desire I feel. And I'm kinda dazed, questioning if this internal fire is real. But whether wrong or right, one thing rings true. I have a ravenous appetite for the love of you! I compare you to past loves - you are so much more. To love and be loved, I'd never do again, I swore. But gazing into your beautiful eyes I know it's time. This love of you's so fierce I couldn't stop on a dime! But whether wrong or right, one thing is true. I have an incredible hunger for the love of you! Note: I wrote first stanza and Deb wrote the second.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/12/2011 10:30:00 AM
A beautiful write, well done Jimmy. My hubby is a Jim and my son a James, my two special men. This is a really good poem:))) Thank you for commenting on my poem.
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Date: 1/5/2011 4:42:00 AM
Pleasing collaboration on the love of you- equally great, Jimmy
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Date: 1/4/2011 8:54:00 PM
Beautiful collaboration JAM and Deb! Filled with passion and excitement..Well-written expressions of love. Love Audrey
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