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The Love of Two

Naked two, one astride,
Absorbing passions;
Internal joys flow.


http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/love3.php

Copyright © James Fraser | Year Posted 2009

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July 12, 2009 at 1:40 PM

Beautiful passionate poem James, brilliant, thanks for your comment on mine as always, jo x

James Peranteau

July 12, 2009 at 8:54 AM

James,...wonderful passion in this awesome poetry !!!! james

Diane Christian

July 12, 2009 at 5:39 AM

aww so romantic and passionate, well written, true love should be cherished and enjoyed, God bless from diane

July 12, 2009 at 1:14 AM

Woah I am going to take a hot shower sexy haiku lol and to the point ... loved it James thank you for your comments on my little scribbles as well Love Jayne x x

July 11, 2009 at 10:25 PM

Hey, you are talking about pleasure... Hips in rythm, lips shakings... Hell... Creative piece James! You are gifted. You are such a wonderful poet, please keep writing Great you! Adeleke

July 11, 2009 at 8:40 PM

A passionate Haiku James, penned nicely my friend.

July 11, 2009 at 3:15 PM

Nice Haiku. Sara

July 11, 2009 at 3:14 PM

Great capture of two people in love James. Keep it up my friend. Thanks for all your comments. Nate

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