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The Love of Our Lives

I will bring the world to your feet I will not be discreet I will say it out loud I will erase all the cloud Make it a bright shiny day In a month of May Sweet gentle breeze I will be at your arms You will kiss my eyelids We shall fall asleep Dream of a perfect life The love of our lives

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Beata Agustin

Date: 3/14/2024 1:25:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/7/2016 1:33:00 AM

ASHEK, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA

Skat A

Date: 11/11/2015 11:35:00 PM

Ashek, ENJOYED.. Stopped by to say hello, I enjoyed reading your poem today. FOREVER <3 SKAT"