The Love of An Angel

When I think of you I, see a smile that doesn't end. I see a friend who understands I turn to you in a time of need To help me find the peace I seek. I am young and naive But with some love and guidance my friend You can help me make it make sense. My spirit is growing and longing for more. I am a fire burning out of control Take my hand and walk with me Telling stories I can keep. I may stumble trip and fall But you’re my angel helping me through it all. You build my strength and confidence.
When I think of you I, see time and time again, you standing before crossroads. With all your heavy burdens bare, they are more vast than your resolve, more complex to ever share, your broken path you have followed, seems only there for you, but in his spirit you now walk your choices will be true. for his path is blessings. the way to him is love. your heart is full of joy with eternity above.
Tracie's contest By cory long and John Aaron Green
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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October 16, 2012 at 3:50 PM
Cory,, congratulations in Traice's sweet 's "When I think of you.. I (collab)" contest.. :-) always~pd
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October 12, 2012 at 10:47 AM
Hiya Cory,...I am savin' this one for my favs bc I know the personal stories behind this collab and it brings me tears of joy! I too am elated that God sent friends my way when I needed them most and they will be there for u also in eternity...u are a great lady...Keep shinin', you smile fairy...hahah..luv, gwendolen
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October 12, 2012 at 12:07 AM
wonderful to have friends like this. Big congrats, Cory and for John too!
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October 11, 2012 at 12:31 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Tracie's "Collab" contest Cory. Love, Carol
Guzzi Avatar
October 11, 2012 at 10:38 AM
Hand in hand, heart in heart. Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
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October 11, 2012 at 9:19 AM
CONGRATS CORY ON A MAFNIFICENT WRITE AND WIN WITH JOHN .. BEAUTIFUL SENTIMENTS FLOW AND A TRUUE BOND IS EVIDENT .. A BLESSED FRIENDSHIP .. SO HAPPY TO SEE U BOTH ON WINNERS LIST BUT SORRY JOHN DID NOT ENTER HIS HALF LUV .. MISS U BUDDY ..
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September 16, 2012 at 3:21 AM
seems so beautiful :D
Eastman Avatar
September 15, 2012 at 4:35 PM
A great combination of thoughts and words. Beautifully laid together.
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September 14, 2012 at 5:09 PM
this is a wonderful collaboration my friends! This is a truly awesome poem, harmonious and true, I love each and ever word of it! This is a special write, thanks for sharing! Great Work!!
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September 14, 2012 at 2:55 PM
John this was so much fun to write.. Love it! hugs and blessings cory
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