The Love Inside of Me

I long to see you smile, feel your lips, hold you close If you peer inside my heart, you’ll see it’s you I love the most I can hardly keep inside, my love for you I cannot hide I find it hard to stay away from you from day to day I pray the time will come when you will know and you will see That none can match the love I have for you inside of me

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/3/2013 6:36:00 AM

Again you have the ladies swooning. Well done.

Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper
Date: 8/3/2013 3:55:00 PM

Thanks my man! Yeah this is a newer one, I believe 2012, but the format was taken from a much older one I wrote back in the mid 90s. Thanks again! MC

Shanity Rain

Date: 7/29/2013 10:51:00 PM

it is hard to read others and call myself a poet ~ To hear it from many of the well spoken ! In fact , my very 1st poem , i can not get to "There is a place " the 1st posted ~ We learn and keep learning ! Or I do ! Can you copy and paste it , and send to me , I have tried everything to pull it up and read it from my computer and it won't , the other3 poems I can read ?? Baffled and Thank-you :) UPDATE !! I rewrote "There is a place " for almost a week , there was not a place ! Embarrassed , my 1st submission , Haha ~

Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper
Date: 7/30/2013 9:17:00 AM

Very Weird, I'll inbox you okay? :) MC

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/20/2013 3:58:00 PM

- Beautiful words in a very sweet poem, thanks for sharing! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper
Date: 7/30/2013 9:18:00 AM

Oh thank you, you, as usualy, are too kind! MC

Eileen Manassian

Date: 7/20/2013 2:11:00 PM

:-D Awwwwww....this is beautiful....I'm a hopeless romatic too. Thanks for your lovely visits and encouraging words...

Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper
Date: 7/20/2013 2:17:00 PM

Well thank you very much, and that's good to hear...I don't think there are very many of us out there. LOL! You write very well and I look forward to reading more of your work! MC