The Love Bird

It’s in your hand,
touching the palm.
Joyfully chirping,
peaceful and calm.

If you try to hold on,
the bird will fly away.
Just let it be free,
and it’ll stay someday.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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October 25, 2009 at 1:31 PM
Interesting perspective. Nice use of imagery. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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October 23, 2009 at 11:26 AM
Dear Roderick, Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry this week. Lainie
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October 19, 2009 at 2:08 PM
Congratulations to you Roderick on your poem being featured this week You've finally gained the recognition that you probably didn't seek If you're like me you wrote your poem because your heart had something to say You thanked us for reading by writing good words, accept thanks in return today
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October 19, 2009 at 10:27 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week >> James
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October 18, 2009 at 5:15 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Roderick. Love, Carol
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September 30, 2009 at 5:43 PM
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