The Love Affair

That sultry night

Heavenly Hot He came

Endearing and Exciting

Like a summer scented waft

Oceanic eyes all over me,

Vulnerable and virtuous  to his kiss

Enchanted by the moment's bliss

All I am I  gave to him,

Forbidden fantasies He fulfilled.

Face to face We bid adieu

Away He sailed in distant waves

Iridescent shadows of his smile

Reminisce memories of last embrace. 


Not for the contest,but inspired 
by Regina Riddle's Romance contest

a fiction write
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Callus Avatar
October 8, 2014 at 1:18 PM
Hi Charm....only when I read your note did I realize that this is an acrostic...it flows so well that it hides the fact that it is. I too wrote a poem for Gina's contest, but when I went to post it found that it had closed! (goes in my drawer, for now). Full marks for this romantic and imaginative write; fortunately you're left with lovely memories. // paul
Neels Avatar
October 7, 2014 at 10:40 PM
Romance in Caps, is what I would call this beauty Charma ;) absolutely love it. Hope you are doing good hun.. love W
Bateman Avatar
October 7, 2014 at 4:49 PM
Charma, A quite fabulous and marvelous write here. It exudes that enchantment and enthrallment of romance. This is a "7" and is Outstanding!! Cheers, Gary
Yvonne Avatar
October 7, 2014 at 4:13 PM
Yes this is a winner just like Andrea said. It flows beautifully speaks of romance and grabs us by the neck and shakes love out of us.
Dietrich Avatar
October 7, 2014 at 3:55 PM
oh,gosh just ENTER it, Charma. It is a WINNING Poem. For romance, nothing could be better!!
May Avatar
October 7, 2014 at 2:59 PM
Beautifully written Charmaine....enjoyed
Devonshire Avatar
October 7, 2014 at 12:25 PM
Hon, I can relate to this so much. Many of those I've loved have "sailed in distant waves." Still, I don't regret the time spent with them. Love is always a blessing, even if it doesn't last a lifetime. Beautifully written! I didn't realize you were posting again. So nice to see your work. Love, Carolyn
Onclaud Avatar
October 7, 2014 at 9:55 AM
amazing kind of thrill, charms.. a beautiful love poem so softly expressed.. join the contest!.. huggs
Trifiatis Avatar
October 7, 2014 at 7:25 AM
What a marvelously romantic affair with overtones of nostalgia and regret! Excellent, dear Charmaine! A seven!
Nance Avatar
October 7, 2014 at 6:32 AM
What an affair! I enjoyed this :):) :)
Manassian Avatar
October 7, 2014 at 5:52 AM
Lovely, my sweet. Mine isn't for the contest either. You did a great job with this...so smooth...so sweet...You should enter it. Hugs
Mcdaid Avatar
October 7, 2014 at 4:19 AM
really very beautiful picture you painted charmaine excellent pen dear friend
Andresen Avatar
October 7, 2014 at 4:17 AM
- A sweet and romantic poem Charmaine - A pleasure to read - I hope your Tuesday will be fine and full of romance - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Smith Avatar
October 7, 2014 at 3:52 AM
Very romantic and sensual.... The disclaimer made me chuckle.... Hugs Tim
Chircop Avatar
October 7, 2014 at 5:00 AM
: )
Allison Avatar
October 7, 2014 at 1:07 AM
Oh I wish it was for the contest it is divine! Hugs jan xxx
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