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The Love Affair

That sultry night Heavenly Hot He came Endearing and Exciting Like a summer scented waft Oceanic eyes all over me, Vulnerable and virtuous to his kiss Enchanted by the moment's bliss All I am I gave to him, Forbidden fantasies He fulfilled. Face to face We bid adieu Away He sailed in distant waves Iridescent shadows of his smile Reminisce memories of last embrace. Not for the contest,but inspired by Regina Riddle's Romance contest a fiction write

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Paul Callus

Date: 10/8/2014 1:18:00 PM

Hi Charm....only when I read your note did I realize that this is an acrostic...it flows so well that it hides the fact that it is. I too wrote a poem for Gina's contest, but when I went to post it found that it had closed! (goes in my drawer, for now). Full marks for this romantic and imaginative write; fortunately you're left with lovely memories. // paul

Wilma Neels

Date: 10/7/2014 10:40:00 PM

Romance in Caps, is what I would call this beauty Charma ;) absolutely love it. Hope you are doing good hun.. love W

Gary Bateman

Date: 10/7/2014 4:49:00 PM

Charma, A quite fabulous and marvelous write here. It exudes that enchantment and enthrallment of romance. This is a "7" and is Outstanding!! Cheers, Gary

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 10/7/2014 4:13:00 PM

Yes this is a winner just like Andrea said. It flows beautifully speaks of romance and grabs us by the neck and shakes love out of us.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/7/2014 3:55:00 PM

oh,gosh just ENTER it, Charma. It is a WINNING Poem. For romance, nothing could be better!!

Joseph May

Date: 10/7/2014 2:59:00 PM

Beautifully written Charmaine....enjoyed

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/7/2014 12:25:00 PM

Hon, I can relate to this so much. Many of those I've loved have "sailed in distant waves." Still, I don't regret the time spent with them. Love is always a blessing, even if it doesn't last a lifetime. Beautifully written! I didn't realize you were posting again. So nice to see your work. Love, Carolyn