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The Love Affair

That sultry night

Heavenly Hot He came

Endearing and Exciting

Like a summer scented waft

Oceanic eyes all over me,

Vulnerable and virtuous  to his kiss

Enchanted by the moment's bliss

All I am I  gave to him,

Forbidden fantasies He fulfilled.

Face to face We bid adieu

Away He sailed in distant waves

Iridescent shadows of his smile

Reminisce memories of last embrace. 


Not for the contest,but inspired 
by Regina Riddle's Romance contest

a fiction write

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 10/8/2014 1:18:00 PM
Hi Charm....only when I read your note did I realize that this is an acrostic...it flows so well that it hides the fact that it is. I too wrote a poem for Gina's contest, but when I went to post it found that it had closed! (goes in my drawer, for now). Full marks for this romantic and imaginative write; fortunately you're left with lovely memories. // paul
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Date: 10/8/2014 12:53:00 AM
So powerfully passionate it's hard to believe its fiction!
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Date: 10/7/2014 10:40:00 PM
Romance in Caps, is what I would call this beauty Charma ;) absolutely love it. Hope you are doing good hun.. love W
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Date: 10/7/2014 4:49:00 PM
Charma, A quite fabulous and marvelous write here. It exudes that enchantment and enthrallment of romance. This is a "7" and is Outstanding!! Cheers, Gary
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Date: 10/7/2014 4:13:00 PM
Yes this is a winner just like Andrea said. It flows beautifully speaks of romance and grabs us by the neck and shakes love out of us.
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Date: 10/7/2014 3:55:00 PM
oh,gosh just ENTER it, Charma. It is a WINNING Poem. For romance, nothing could be better!!
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Date: 10/7/2014 2:59:00 PM
Beautifully written Charmaine....enjoyed
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Date: 10/7/2014 12:25:00 PM
Hon, I can relate to this so much. Many of those I've loved have "sailed in distant waves." Still, I don't regret the time spent with them. Love is always a blessing, even if it doesn't last a lifetime. Beautifully written! I didn't realize you were posting again. So nice to see your work. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/7/2014 9:55:00 AM
amazing kind of thrill, charms.. a beautiful love poem so softly expressed.. join the contest!.. huggs
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Date: 10/7/2014 7:25:00 AM
What a marvelously romantic affair with overtones of nostalgia and regret! Excellent, dear Charmaine! A seven!
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Date: 10/7/2014 6:32:00 AM
What an affair! I enjoyed this :):) :)
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Date: 10/7/2014 5:52:00 AM
Lovely, my sweet. Mine isn't for the contest either. You did a great job with this...so smooth...so sweet...You should enter it. Hugs
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Date: 10/7/2014 4:19:00 AM
really very beautiful picture you painted charmaine excellent pen dear friend
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Date: 10/7/2014 4:17:00 AM
- A sweet and romantic poem Charmaine - A pleasure to read - I hope your Tuesday will be fine and full of romance - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/7/2014 3:52:00 AM
Very romantic and sensual.... The disclaimer made me chuckle.... Hugs Tim
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Date: 10/7/2014 5:00:00 AM
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Date: 10/7/2014 1:07:00 AM
Oh I wish it was for the contest it is divine! Hugs jan xxx
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