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If I could count the ways I have day dreamt of winning the BIG one...and how it might go down, here's one thought.  Oh, and I HAVE NOT won any lottery.  I rarely win anything, because I seldom apply or buy tickets.
Cars raced passed, As I patiently waited, Nervously filled with distrust. At a crossing where safe crossing, Is now indicated, This courier of fortunes Not yet out of luck. I pick up my pace Like a man on a mission. My thoughts now a vortex Of possible plays. But to visit this office A long planned decision. The matter at hand Sheer providence dictates. The doors open freely, I enter within, To the cheers of firm staffers And welcoming smiles. Word had spread quickly To my eyes and chagrin, At the expense of my privacy, My name now beguiled. The anteroom sanctum Filled with polite pushy haste, Containing serious suits Who’d not rise from their seats, Till proof be their witness, No moment to waste, And the breech of my privacy? Short apology, hurried movement, And onward at a feverish pace! Careful inspection and lens, Quickly confirm my declare, Faces stiffened to stifle, The emotional urge; To rejoice while an outside call To far voices is made, Numbers again shared, One through six, double check, Final digits confirmed. Moods shifted quickly As reality spawns. To great cheers And some fanfare, Till ushered away; With military precision, And much tinted glass, Police guarding me And ticket, From mayhem this day. Since winning the big one, I've gained many friends, Among them some old ones Who at best were estranged; Now calling me sir, With no memory of past, Nine figures and wow, Both handsome AND popular... ...finally, at last! © Michael Wegman, 2014

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Date: 2/26/2014 10:43:00 PM
They are very large coveted prizes. Don't you wish you were conveying a factual account here?
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Michael Wegman
Date: 2/27/2014 8:06:00 AM
WITHOUT A DOUBT, Robert!!!
Date: 2/26/2014 12:23:00 PM
welcome aboard, michael... ohhh, the thrill of luck!..your piece held my interest for its great flow and exciting build up, with terrific anticipation cleverly injected!.. welll done!... thanks for coming around!.. huggs
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Michael Wegman
Date: 2/26/2014 3:43:00 PM
Many thanks dearest Nette...for your fine critique and welcomed words of affirmation! I am loving my new home in thick soup and have become a Premium member in support! :-)

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