Jenish Somadas Poet Epigram

The Lost Might

The Sun was far, hot and big
Before I trapped him in my camera;
Like the mighty sea lost its might
When carried away in a bucket.









Honorable Mention in STRAND SELECT 9 ,any form ,any theme Poetry Contest sponsored by Brian Strand

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Sam Kauffman January 12, 2020 at 6:41 PM Very nice, Jenish. Compare and contrast the large and the small - the mighty brought down to size! Congratulations on your HM! Jenish Somadas January 12, 2020 at 9:24 PM Thank you Sam for your kind comment..

Brenda Chiri January 12, 2020 at 1:13 PM Congratulations on your HM!;) Jenish Somadas January 12, 2020 at 10:51 PM Thank you Brenda..

Gershon Wolf December 8, 2019 at 1:02 PM It only hit me (finally!) on the third visit/read. 'Hard-hat Wolf' Jenish Somadas December 8, 2019 at 9:02 PM Thank you for visiting/reading it again and again..

Kim Rodrigues December 8, 2019 at 6:48 AM Very interesting, Jenish! The capturing of big and powerful things in small and weaker vessels. Jenish Somadas December 8, 2019 at 9:20 AM Yes.. We, the weaker vessels, are part of the universal consciousness..

Maurice Rigoler December 8, 2019 at 4:38 AM A powerful and clinching ending to this epigram! Wish I had written it. Thank you for reading my work. Best to you in your writing endeavors. / M Jenish Somadas December 8, 2019 at 9:17 AM Thank you Maurice for your kind comment..

Caren Krutsinger December 8, 2019 at 2:39 AM The personalization of the sun made me smile as I read this. Jenish Somadas December 8, 2019 at 2:41 AM lol.. Thanks for your visit and comment...

Constance La France December 4, 2019 at 5:53 PM Jenish, love your epigram and best of luck in the contest ! Jenish Somadas December 4, 2019 at 10:37 PM Thank you..

Gershon Wolf December 3, 2019 at 10:58 PM One more checked off on the old 'bucket list! G.L. in the contest, Jenish. Smiles, Gershon Jenish Somadas December 3, 2019 at 11:19 PM Thank you Gershon.. We usually forget in our individual buckets that we are all part of the mighty universal consciousness...

Juliet Ligon December 3, 2019 at 7:58 PM Very interesting. I like it. Jenish Somadas December 3, 2019 at 10:31 PM Thank you Juliet for your visit..

Richard Lamoureux December 3, 2019 at 8:07 AM Excellent, excellent. Such a cool piece. Jenish Somadas December 3, 2019 at 10:31 PM Thank you Richard..

Vijay Pandit December 3, 2019 at 6:23 AM Clever poetry--well done, Jenish. Jenish Somadas December 3, 2019 at 6:28 AM Thank you Vijay for your appreciation..

Demetrios Trifiatis December 3, 2019 at 3:36 AM Hahaha! Witty and powerful dear Jenish. Jenish Somadas December 3, 2019 at 3:46 AM Thank you Demetrios..