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The Lost Might

The Sun was far, hot and big Before I trapped him in my camera; Like the mighty sea lost its might When carried away in a bucket. Honorable Mention in STRAND SELECT 9 ,any form ,any theme Poetry Contest sponsored by Brian Strand

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Date: 1/12/2020 6:41:00 PM
Very nice, Jenish. Compare and contrast the large and the small - the mighty brought down to size! Congratulations on your HM!
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/12/2020 9:24:00 PM
Thank you Sam for your kind comment..
Date: 1/12/2020 1:13:00 PM
Congratulations on your HM!;)
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/12/2020 10:51:00 PM
Thank you Brenda..
Date: 12/8/2019 1:02:00 PM
It only hit me (finally!) on the third visit/read. 'Hard-hat Wolf'
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 12/8/2019 9:02:00 PM
Thank you for visiting/reading it again and again..
Date: 12/8/2019 6:48:00 AM
Very interesting, Jenish! The capturing of big and powerful things in small and weaker vessels.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 12/8/2019 9:20:00 AM
Yes.. We, the weaker vessels, are part of the universal consciousness..
Date: 12/8/2019 4:38:00 AM
A powerful and clinching ending to this epigram! Wish I had written it. Thank you for reading my work. Best to you in your writing endeavors. / M
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 12/8/2019 9:17:00 AM
Thank you Maurice for your kind comment..
Date: 12/8/2019 2:39:00 AM
The personalization of the sun made me smile as I read this.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 12/8/2019 2:41:00 AM
lol.. Thanks for your visit and comment...
Date: 12/4/2019 5:53:00 PM
Jenish, love your epigram and best of luck in the contest !
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 12/4/2019 10:37:00 PM
Thank you..
Date: 12/3/2019 10:58:00 PM
One more checked off on the old 'bucket list! G.L. in the contest, Jenish. Smiles, Gershon
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 12/3/2019 11:19:00 PM
Thank you Gershon.. We usually forget in our individual buckets that we are all part of the mighty universal consciousness...
Date: 12/3/2019 7:58:00 PM
Very interesting. I like it.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 12/3/2019 10:31:00 PM
Thank you Juliet for your visit..
Date: 12/3/2019 8:07:00 AM
Excellent, excellent. Such a cool piece.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 12/3/2019 10:31:00 PM
Thank you Richard..
Date: 12/3/2019 6:23:00 AM
Clever poetry--well done, Jenish.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 12/3/2019 6:28:00 AM
Thank you Vijay for your appreciation..
Date: 12/3/2019 3:36:00 AM
Hahaha! Witty and powerful dear Jenish.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 12/3/2019 3:46:00 AM
Thank you Demetrios..

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