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Inspired by Charles Messina

Written 6/18/2023

Millie our three-year-old With tears that rolled Down her pink little cheeks As she looks around and peeks Under her dolls bed And under its bedspread. I went out to see what was wrong, It was going on too long. "Mommy, I cannot find my doll. I had her wrap in her shawl And laid her here in her bed." I look up our yorkie has fled Into the house to his bed. There under his chin laid the doll. "No. No Loll. It’s not your doll."

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Date: 6/21/2023 8:38:00 PM
Pups, they can always find their cozy place can't they? Puppies are the trickiest. This little guy needed a lesson in sharing. Poor little sweet girl. Ruff :0(
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Eve Roper
Date: 6/21/2023 8:44:00 PM
Hello Marikate, my yorkie is always stealing my grandson stuff animals.
Date: 6/20/2023 4:54:00 AM
So sweet, Eve:)
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Date: 6/18/2023 11:25:00 PM
Loved this poem. Dogs can be pests. Hope you'll find your door. Who knows, it may be with your neighbor.
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Date: 6/18/2023 1:26:00 PM
pets can be pests Eve, i can picture the scene, glad it had a happy ending:-) hugs jan xx
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