The Loss of Wisdom

They mourn wisdom not yet learned It flounces from their grasp, withers Away in the solar wind it burns Itself in the remnants of What once was a beautiful mind, They mourn wisdom not yet learned In this instanced reality Parallel our own treasured find Whisked away on the breeze it yearns Awhile for its past then thinks, as They mourn wisdom not yet learned These creatures of habit turn to Only what they knew, will never know The truth in starlight again nor the Real beauty of the sun's glow They mourn wisdom not yet learned
"Nolite umquam oblivisci" *Took 5th place in the February 2012 International Poetry Soup contest.
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Breedt Avatar
July 29, 2016 at 6:46 AM
congratulations on your win. this is a great work and intelligently constructed. well done
Oj Avatar
June 12, 2013 at 5:15 AM
Deep... deep. Real deep. Deep and searching- searching for that utter loss- of wisdom. Congratulations Tim. Stay' please' in the stream. Exception OJ
De Burca Avatar
May 16, 2013 at 3:13 PM
I enjoyed your poem, congrats on your winning poem.
Dom Avatar
March 22, 2013 at 8:20 AM
Refined is the word. Not forgetting this one too quickly.
A   Avatar
October 18, 2012 at 8:53 PM
Tim:-) congratulations with your wonderful win in the " February, 2012 Contest " It is very nice to see you on this winning list..*'.*'.*' hip hip hooray. Good night :-) always~ PD
Goudreau Avatar
September 17, 2012 at 5:41 PM
Congratulations Tim on your well deserved winnings of recognization. You are a clever and refined writer. Keep up the excellent work. Hugs,
Johnson Avatar
August 9, 2012 at 6:09 PM
Congratulations on your poem and big win in the International contest. A big honor you should savor. Love, Joyce
Sanders Avatar
August 2, 2012 at 9:05 PM
Wow!!! outstanding work Tim. Congratulations on winning.
Brown Avatar
August 1, 2012 at 8:01 PM
Congratulations on your win in the PoetrySoup International Contest Tim. Love, Carol
Kendrick Avatar
July 31, 2012 at 6:36 PM
((()))Congrats on your winning work..Sara
Merryman Avatar
July 31, 2012 at 9:51 AM
Tim, congrats on your win in the International Poetry Soup contest! I just love the repeated line in your poem. Well done! Love,Kim
Poet Avatar
July 31, 2012 at 1:18 AM
Congrats Tim on your big win!!!Enjoyed the read.
Dietrich Avatar
July 30, 2012 at 3:40 PM
very interesting and beautifully penned, Tim. You hit on some thought provoking points here on wisdom. Big congrats for your win in the contest.
Mac Donald Avatar
July 30, 2012 at 1:36 PM
This is a beauty, Tim. Congratulations on your win with this profoundly thought provoking write! Mikki
Gooden Avatar
July 30, 2012 at 11:57 AM
Congrats on your win,Tim.
Babcock Avatar
July 29, 2012 at 5:35 PM
Congrats on your awesome win. love phyl
Andresen Avatar
July 29, 2012 at 2:11 PM
Tim WELL DONE - A WIN FOR YOU - CONGRATS !!!! - oxox love Anne-Lise
Williams Avatar
July 29, 2012 at 1:01 PM
Tim, congratulations on your International win..David
Guzzi Avatar
July 19, 2012 at 6:55 PM
There is a form which moves the repeated line down through the verse..can't remember which but you did this very effectively. Congrad's on your fine write getting to round 1. Light & Love
Brown Avatar
July 18, 2012 at 6:47 AM
Congratulations on your poem making it through round one of the PoetrySoup International Poetry Contest. I wish you the best in the finals Tim. Love, Carol
Brown Avatar
September 27, 2011 at 9:32 AM
I am stopping by your wonderful poetry today to thank you for your kind comments on my writing Tim. Hope you have an inspiration filled week. Love, Carol
Ramsdale Avatar
September 3, 2011 at 3:53 AM
A Fourth Place Win Congratulations. CR
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September 2, 2011 at 7:48 AM
Tim, I love te way you describing the wisdom that was once readily available to us but now remains elusive as we age. Very well expressed and I wish you well in the contest. Unfortunately the sonnet was based on bad health news i just received. Thanks for reading it. Love, Carolyn
Wesley Avatar
August 31, 2011 at 9:28 PM
A verse full of emotion, it's sadness is deeply touching. Tim
Ramage Avatar
August 31, 2011 at 8:21 AM
Nice poem Tim, I really enjoyed it. Lee
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