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The Loser, My Abuser

I think he is going to kill me Tomorrow I might just be history I hear his voice "Come out Samantha this isn't a choice!" I peer around the corner and say "I'm here, please please go away." He grabs my arm and drags me forward I want to run away but still I move toward The man who is full of hate The fact that he's drunk seals my fate He slaps me across the face I try to run, but this isn't a race He grabs me, and throws me down My head bounces off the ground I try to crawl away But he kicks me hard and there I stay He looks me over, he seems to be done For tonight he's had his fun

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/14/2011 12:09:00 AM
Bring it! Get the demons out. Words, my only release from the pulverizing pain. keep it up and you will feel better. (if these are true accounts) If not then they are wonderful expression anyways.
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Date: 5/30/2011 5:56:00 AM
the last line makes this poem..
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Date: 4/5/2011 6:36:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your sad but excellent poetry Raquel. I enjoyed reading it and hope to read more of it soon. May you always find the inspiration to continue with your writing endeavors. Love, Carol
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