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The Lord,Gabriel,Mivon,Adam and the Lord

When Adam and Eve, Had from the garden taken their leave. And menace of sorrowful trends, Is to their jolly heart lend. Sent God Gabriel for their sake, To convey to them all goodness make. Sent God Gabriel to Eden, To pluck off the sweetning hidden. But as he thread the path of Eden, Saw he Mivon,the keeper of the gate, Then said he to him by witty fate, For he cannot peep without his consent. "Behold,God has commanded me, To come into the garden. And to take from it sweet smelling incense, And give it to Adam's existence." And after he had billed his tongue, Swiftly did Mivon put out his sword. And without entrench'd critiques prolong'd. Went Gabriel to Eden,Adam and the Lord.

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Date: 8/4/2017 4:20:00 PM
Love this write, and thank you for reading my Divine :)
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Date: 8/4/2017 12:26:00 PM
I really enjoy the use of language quite interesting.
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