The Lord Made Me Smile

As I stood on the porch at eveningtide,
     I saw them slowly flying away with a glide.

   
     Their wings were spread to catch the air,
     But they caught more, as I stood there.

  
      For I saw something else in that beautiful scene,
      I saw a face, somber and serene.


      It made me think of the day gone by,
      As the sun fell lower in the sky.


      It was the face of the day the Lord just spent,
      And was surely there, and heaven sent.


      His face was made by the light, darkness, and those birds out a mile,
      He was reminding me, that I had reasons to smile.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Culverhouse Avatar
July 13, 2010 at 4:27 AM
great write!
Rich Avatar
July 12, 2010 at 6:29 PM
Enjoyed this write today. Please check out my latest criminals part 3 when you have time.. ofcourse the story isn't true. Have a great day.
Fraser Avatar
July 12, 2010 at 12:22 PM
Many congratulations on your win in Carolyn's contest Daniel >> James
Brown Avatar
July 12, 2010 at 11:26 AM
Congratulations Daniel on your win in Carolyn Devonshire's contest "Heaven Sent Smiles". Love, Carol
Neels Avatar
July 12, 2010 at 5:21 AM
Congratulations on you win Daniel, well deserved Wilma
Mehta Avatar
July 11, 2010 at 9:26 PM
Congrats on the win, Daniel
Dietrich Avatar
July 11, 2010 at 5:16 PM
wow, really good poem, Daniel. Congratulations. Andrea
Freeman Avatar
July 11, 2010 at 3:39 PM
Congratulations, Daniel on your poem's success in Carolyn's contest. Agape, Moses
Johnson Avatar
July 11, 2010 at 3:34 PM
And now we all have reason to smile. Congratulations on your win with this beauty. Love, Joyce
Devonshire Avatar
July 11, 2010 at 12:00 PM
He makes me smile too. Congratulations on your placement in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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