The Loop (The Tale of Turtle Soup)

Once a little harmless turtle went a- walking ‘round the loop, 
caught his little baby toe and ended up in turtle soup.

While the doves mourned his misfortune, sun set down behind the hills,
all the turtles gathered in their shells to guard against such spills.

On the morrow, signs were posted there before the deadly loop-
this prevented harmless turtles ending up in yucky soup.

As the days stretched into weeks, the peace in turtledom was great:
not a single little shell-back ended up in bowl or plate.

Came along one day a snakey- past the sign and ‘round the loop,
caught his little snakey belly and, you guessed it- snakey soup!

For he hadn’t read the sign, so neatly scribed in turtle scratch,
(in a slip’ry snakey brain that sort of thing is hard to catch).

Since the turtle signs are meant for little turtle eyes to see,
makes them not so clear to others, like a snake or you and me.

If, by chance, your toes go walking, don’t get caught around the loop-
stubbing one and then another, you’ll end up as poet soup!


(for the Turtle Soup contest)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
September 24, 2010 at 7:56 PM
Just can only revisit your poems now. You should do some more humorous ones. I think you are great at it. I wrote today about my escapade at the roller skating rink if you want to see it at the blog. too long to describe again in an email. Haha. LUv, Andrea
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September 23, 2010 at 12:14 PM
YES, I REMEMBER THIS CONTEST. I THINK ALL ENTRIES WHERE FUN AND FUNNY. ENJOYED THIS POEM. I LAUGHED SO HARD AT THE END. GREAT, HAVE A NICE DAY*luv~SKAT
Nandy Avatar
August 25, 2010 at 10:00 AM
Oh i loved it! you will end up as poet soup ...kind of a dedication to the site and a story unravelled of a turtle around the loop..the rhyming is interesting indeed...n thank you for your gracious remarks on who cares....yes, it is a pity witnessing no thought whatsoever, we are coulded n see no light..world would have been a b'ful place if only ppl cared!
Mehta Avatar
August 16, 2010 at 8:43 PM
Congrats on the win, Kris
Sweetheart Avatar
August 9, 2010 at 8:22 PM
Appreciate your welcome comments tonight Kris.. looking forward to more dynamic writes from u to read..with luv..
Brown Avatar
August 9, 2010 at 9:19 AM
Congratulations Kris on your win in (Destroyer((Poet's contest "Turtle Soup". Love, Carol
Roberts Avatar
August 8, 2010 at 9:42 AM
adorable, congrats on your win
Sweetheart Avatar
August 8, 2010 at 6:57 AM
Congrats Kris on your winning poem in P.D.'s turtle contest with this creative and very entertaining write .. great entry.. enjoy your win this happy Sunday..with luv..
K. Avatar
August 8, 2010 at 6:22 AM
totally enjoyed this the first time I read it and still super enjoy this Kris!! Super congrats on your win in pd's contest ^_^ --nikko :)
Fraser Avatar
August 8, 2010 at 5:34 AM
Well deserved win with this gem of a poem Kris. Many congrats in PD's contest >> James
A   Avatar
August 8, 2010 at 12:15 AM
congratulations!! enjoyed the ending of your poem. poet soup,lol,..p.d.
Devonshire Avatar
August 5, 2010 at 10:07 AM
This is very funny, Kris. Quite a delight to read! Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn
Dietrich Avatar
August 4, 2010 at 6:39 PM
very very clever. As if some silly small slow turtles could rassle us poets to the ground. haha. I really enjoyed your writing! Luv, Andrea
Kendrick Avatar
August 4, 2010 at 6:47 AM
Got the chuckles from this one..Excellent eye opener and made my morn brighter.I see winners' circle in the future for this one..Good luck..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work...Sara
Tideswell Avatar
August 4, 2010 at 1:50 AM
Haha, adorable and cute. A complete joy to read. This contest is going to be hard to judge, there are some excellent entries. Yours is up there amongst the top contenders I think. Loved it ~ Sharon :)
K. Avatar
August 4, 2010 at 1:34 AM
OOps, I think I just stubbed my toe and fell into poetry soup ;) -- This is such an adorable and witty poem, Kris! Souper (haha) enjoyed this one!! I hope this scores high!! -- nikko :)
Sweetheart Avatar
August 3, 2010 at 7:33 PM
FABULOUS Kris.. a wonderful tale P.D. will surely luv.. good luck in the contest.. its a magnificent couplet and enjoyed the story as well.. my entry is Four Turtles for Soup about my four sons and their turtles... cool... enjoyed.. with luv..
Johnson Avatar
August 3, 2010 at 8:00 AM
Very good sounds like a winner to me. Love, Joyce
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