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The Look Out

Crows like sentinels Black watchful guarding always Someone blinded them

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/30/2009 9:43:00 AM
This is an excellent Haiku, so sharp and such an uxpected ending. Thanks for noting my poem. Regards: Déirdre Ó Maidín
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Date: 8/30/2009 8:35:00 AM
I just love this Haiku !! My take on this is that your corn is missing ! Corn as in somthing prescious. I pray not ! Great poetry my friend ! james
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Date: 8/30/2009 1:07:00 AM
One of your best work here Sara.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 8/29/2009 4:10:00 PM
Black and loud, always a guard on duty, see every movement! Sincerely Moses
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Date: 8/29/2009 2:21:00 PM
this is so different..i love this style--excellent haiku---charma
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