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The Long Road

He's my brother and he's sure gotten heavy Methinks it's too much pasta and meatballs quite steady Should back off that stuff It's way-way too much A diet of veggies and water would un-fat his belly

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Date: 4/9/2018 7:05:00 AM
Happy jack loved the fast food /it put him in a very good mood / but it grew his tum /and also his bum/his clothes no longer fit he feels screwed /
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Jack Ellison
Date: 4/9/2018 8:35:00 AM
I'll have you know, the tabloids are after me to do a feature article on my amazing weight-loss success story (?)
Date: 4/9/2018 6:33:00 AM
Per chance, you are not talking about 'Your mini me' Jack - Are you? Put him on a curry diet - it may help - No Indian sweets mind you. Maria xox
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Jack Ellison
Date: 4/9/2018 8:32:00 AM
Aww... that's no damn fun!!! You can STILL call me Slim Jim Jack... my slim bum you may whack!!! Poetic??? Lovsies Sweer Maria, Jackles XOXOX

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