Jack Ellison Poet Limerick

The Long Road

He's my brother and he's sure gotten heavy
Methinks it's too much pasta and meatballs quite steady
Should back off that stuff
It's way-way too much
A diet of veggies and water would un-fat his belly

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Tom Cunningham April 9, 2018 at 7:05 AM Happy jack loved the fast food /it put him in a very good mood / but it grew his tum /and also his bum/his clothes no longer fit he feels screwed / Jack Ellison April 9, 2018 at 8:35 AM I'll have you know, the tabloids are after me to do a feature article on my amazing weight-loss success story (?)

Maria Williams April 9, 2018 at 6:33 AM Per chance, you are not talking about 'Your mini me' Jack - Are you? Put him on a curry diet - it may help - No Indian sweets mind you. Maria xox Jack Ellison April 9, 2018 at 8:32 AM Aww... that's no damn fun!!! You can STILL call me Slim Jim Jack... my slim bum you may whack!!! Poetic??? Lovsies Sweer Maria, Jackles XOXOX