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The Long First Date

When I was around 14, I attended a church youth conference that summer, sleeping in a dorm at a college campus and attending fun events with kids of my same religion. The group I was with one day was strolling along a green shady path when ahead of me I spied a young man, very tall, slender, and blonde. He had a Justin Bieber kind of face but with cool piercing eyes, to put almost any young girl’s heart aflutter. I immediately began to think of a way to meet him, and to my surprise, I noticed that he was also noticing me! Meanwhile, another boy, also with a strikingly cute looking face, appeared at my side and began walking with me. He introduced himself as John Spencer. I would compare him to an elf because his features were so delicate. His ears were elflike and his doll face reminded me of the face of an angel. His body was extremely thin and later I learned that he worried so much for his family and friends that he had given himself ulcers before the age of 14! As we talked, I kept looking ahead at the blonde boy, whose name I later learned was Chris. Upon seeing me with John, the incredibly gorgeous Chris gave me a disapproving look and vanished into the crowd. After that, I soon realized that John and I were turning into a “couple” and the rest of my waking moments at the conference I would have my “Johnny Angel” constantly by my side. It was young love, first love, fresh, and sweet, and holding hands with John I felt electrifying chemistry as we intertwined our fingers, playing “handsies,” my favorite new activity! We ate together and attended together all the activities planned for our group, and so my first time with a boyfriend was like an extended date, lasting from the beginning of the week until the end when we rode home together snuggling on the bus and planning when we would see each other again. John lived one town away from mine, in the same city where Chris, the blonde boy, lived too. At future monthly church dances in their city, Davenport, Iowa, I would see them both and learn more about both boys. They became a big part of my newly blossoming adolescent life and the romantic way I was feeling about boys, but that is saved for chapter two of my story! For Carol Brown's "My First Date" Contest

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Date: 10/20/2012 10:31:00 AM
can't wait for part 2, you paint a wonderful picture, my imagination runs wild...
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Date: 10/20/2012 10:32:00 AM
i see Cecilia looking at your oldies, below,, i'm really pleased about that...
Date: 10/16/2012 9:02:00 AM
Such a sweet write that leaves the reader yearning for more....congrats on your win! I sent you soupmail. Hugs
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Date: 7/16/2011 1:22:00 PM
I knew this would be a winner! congratulations andrea :)
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Date: 7/15/2011 9:20:00 PM
Looking forward to cha-pter 2, when love doth blossom like the dew, and love comes to find a way, and chapter two incites dismay:) xo, Don
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Date: 7/15/2011 3:40:00 PM
My congratulations on this win in the contest of Carol, Andrea
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Date: 7/15/2011 2:11:00 PM
Such a terrific story Andrea.Congrats on this wonderful 2nd.place win.~LOTS OF LUV~Teresa
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Date: 7/15/2011 1:56:00 PM
Congrats Andrea on your stellar second place win in first date with this delightful write so emotional my friend.. great ...
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Date: 7/15/2011 12:46:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in my contest and thank you for supporting my contest Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/6/2011 6:39:00 AM
Cute story....enjoyed reading today!!
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Date: 7/4/2011 8:27:00 AM
Good luck in the contest with this very romantic story of your first love..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for stopping by..How are you doing?..Sara
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Date: 7/2/2011 5:16:00 PM
First love and emotions grip, jealousy does maybe sip, but happiness fills the day:) great bio babe, xo, Don
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Date: 7/2/2011 4:09:00 PM
this sounds fun, cupid strikes! now I want to read chapter two haha, hope it does well in the contest...I saw on a blog that you had recent surgery, I hope you are well dear andrea :-)
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Date: 7/2/2011 12:45:00 PM
Oh! and i thought you immune, to such frippery Andrea..still write on am willing to ''suffer''...! (guess what.i am an old romantic after all)
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Date: 7/2/2011 11:19:00 AM
A very interesting write...true stories often are. I wrote one called "First Love" (not for the contest), but my first love left a rather bitter taste...c'est la vie! I'll certainly keep an eye out for Part 2! Good luck in the contest. Love, Robert.
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Date: 7/2/2011 10:04:00 AM
can't wait for chapter two. Davenport I know where that is, i think went through it once on way to somewhere, it i know is on the Miss. River. you wrote a great piece here good luck in contest. thank you for commenting on Rain Finally Came, and boy did it.
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Date: 7/2/2011 7:33:00 AM
Thanks for your comments on the ocean it took a lot of changes on that one before it sounded right. Blue is my favorite color and being inland so far I am fascinated by the ocean and it's mysteries. Funny , because I am afraid of water. Go figure eh? Hope you are feeling better today. love phyl
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Date: 7/2/2011 7:25:00 AM
Now Andrea come on you left us hanging and you better hurry and finish this story. One thing that I hate the most is unfinished stories. I hate watching a movie if their is no ending or reading a book with no conclusion. I'm the type of person who needs an ending and I don't know why. I feel it is a waste of time if you get me interested and leave me hanging(which you are not) but funny that this is how I am. Conclusion please. love phyl
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Date: 7/2/2011 7:20:00 AM
hmm, you and those cutie boys; those were the days, lol... so who got your heart fnally? best winning wishes, heartie! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 7/2/2011 6:02:00 AM
I want to know more! How about a book or a memoir? I'll be your beta reader :) Good luck in the contest!
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Date: 7/2/2011 3:35:00 AM
Hmm very interesting. Good luck in the contest, take care and God bless. Jancarl
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Date: 7/1/2011 10:29:00 PM
And then what happened ? Haha....enjoyed.No dating experience for me.I have to imagine and write a story:)
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Date: 7/1/2011 9:46:00 PM
ya , and then what happened??? when is the sequel?????
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Date: 7/1/2011 9:39:00 PM
This is a total seven my friend because it is so sweet and interesting and leaves the reader wanting to know,"AND THEN WHAT HAPPENED." Great job, well written with good imagery. God BBlesss, JB
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Date: 7/1/2011 9:29:00 PM
What a delicately innocent story. Good luck in the contest. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/1/2011 9:25:00 PM
stunning portrait of young luv ..first luv.. Andrea.. did mine in Bio form too.. thinking of these memories makes u realize how far we have come in life.. good luck in the contest .. amazing write luv..happy 4th..oh wow..fireworks!
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