The Lonesome Gods

Do the lonesome gods up in the sky,
Ever question or wonder why;

Their faithful up and left them bare,
Alone and afraid without a prayer;

No homage is now paid to the gods,
No tribute left to the beings once awed;

Do they ever ponder where their followers went,
Or do they still wait for gifts to be sent;

Has it left them weak, barely hanging on,
Since their worshipers have all gone;

Or are they there, just biding time,
Watching the fallen committing their crimes;

Hoping someone will remember their grace,
The ones that ruled with hammer and mace;

Did they vanish from their temples of stone,
Are they terrified now, at being alone;

I think of them often, wondering if they are there,
And I hope that it helps them, knowing I care.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 2/1/2011 9:02:00 AM
Quite interesting aspect of the gods and how they used to be worshipped and idolized by many on Earth... each Couplet line presents another introspective scene of questions .. enjoyed my friend with luv.. hope u are doing fine..
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Date: 1/31/2011 8:04:00 PM
Oh this is awesome, Tizah. How true these words, Even the Gods themselves need to keep the faith, or we have no chance. Harry
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