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The Lonely Shepherd

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The shepherd's lot will never be an easy one. From morning till night, his work will never be done. Helped by a well-trained German dog, he keeps the flock In good shape, so his physique must be like a rock. Distinctive of his staff that helps him catch some ewe, That had fallen in some trouble before it grew. Always alert for thieves around are abundant, And wild animals, he cannot act redundant. Lone shepherds are not many, but I know of one, He came from God on high and like Him there are none. He distributes pure graces to all who need them. Woe to those who ignore Him, your sorrow will stem.

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Bill Baker

Date: 10/3/2023 3:13:00 PM

It did immediately lead me to think of David in the Bible, Victor. Shepards are string and caring people. Many lessons can be learned from them and their work. Excellent rhyming in this one, my friend. I enjoyed reading it. Bill

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/3/2023 8:32:00 AM

Dear Victor, your potent poetic spills spills with inspiring and consequential beauty. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan

Lenny Gazbowski

Date: 10/1/2023 5:36:00 PM

Beautiful and meaningful read.

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 10/1/2023 10:52:00 AM

The last stanza carries a lot of beauty.. the light of wisdom and the grace of Hope.. God is omnipresent and beautiful graceful souls are His servant.. they are devotees with a holy mission of Love.. Lucky are those who would walk the path trodden by them and follow their Light and inhale from their Hope and Faith.. An amazing insightful poetry and an immense pleasure to read you, Victor! Hope you are doing great! God bless you. Best regards.

Victor Buhagiar
Date: 10/1/2023 10:56:00 AM

What a wonderful comment, dear Besma. Thank you. God bless.

Maria Fernandez-Garcia

Date: 9/29/2023 12:52:00 PM

Fantastic poem Victor. Loved it.xxx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/27/2023 1:34:00 PM

wonderful poem, Victor. Sorry I am so behind here. I just can't seem to get caught up

Eve Roper

Date: 9/27/2023 10:03:00 AM

Very inspirational poem. You’re blessed with the Holy Spirit to write His Wisdom. To you many more blessings my friend

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 9/27/2023 9:33:00 AM

An inspirational poem Victor.

Valsa George

Date: 9/27/2023 9:16:00 AM

Never thought the poem will turn to our great Shepherd. He is the one who keeps vigil over His sheep day and night. The Good shepherd will never desert a lamb limping behind. That's my consolation ! Beautifully written dear Victor

Deb M

Date: 9/27/2023 8:39:00 AM

Lovely heartfelt words Victor! Cuddles ….Debx

Joanna Daniel

Date: 9/26/2023 8:44:00 PM

Very beautiful, Victor:) The True Shepherd calls to His sheep and they hear His voice:)

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 9/26/2023 8:17:00 PM

A wonderful tribute to shepherds who take care of their sheep Victor. The Lord is our shepherd and we are His fleece… Belle

Yann Rolland

Date: 9/26/2023 4:23:00 PM

shepherd on earth and in heaven, so beautiffully written have a nice day

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 9/26/2023 4:17:00 PM

A Shephard has a very special task, to lead the sheep to fervid bountiful promised lands, your poetry shines in al its glory, Victor, your the poet of all poets :)

Christina Bowring

Date: 9/26/2023 1:37:00 PM

Such a well written, profound poem Victor. I especially love the line,’ He distributes pure graces to all who need them’. Really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 9/26/2023 11:41:00 AM

It's nice to read this beautiful poem about the Good Shepherd. Wonderful writing, Victor. :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/26/2023 11:27:00 AM

He is the One Shepherd…the good one who leads us.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/26/2023 10:22:00 AM

Creative work reveals your faith in God and His Son. Thanks for sharing this one with us and I appreciate the visit to my page. Sara

Joseph May

Date: 9/26/2023 9:56:00 AM

The Good Shepherd brings redemption, Very nicely penned Victor..

Panagiota Romios

Date: 9/26/2023 9:52:00 AM

Great poem, we know what you mean, In this world, The good Shepherd keeps watch over a lock in a world, generating fear. People so fearful, they forget the Good Shepherd In a poetic world that runs from God, bt and large, a most needed poem. Pamgie xx

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 9/26/2023 7:57:00 AM

a powerful metaphor....indeed lone shephards are few and far between. I know of whom you speak. His grace has saved my life. Wonderful job, Victor!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/26/2023 6:11:00 AM

A powerful ending--solemn voice to your poem, Victor.

Stephan McBride

Date: 9/26/2023 6:04:00 AM

One God, One Shepherd, One Flock. There is peace,joy and love in the presence of the true Shepherd that sends the promised spirit to dwell within His own, love the picture and poem you have given for one to seek to be in the gates of this Shepherd's protection: )

Sotto Poet

Date: 9/26/2023 5:46:00 AM

Well-penned with a profound meaningful poem, your creativity is shining

Maria Williams

Date: 9/26/2023 3:30:00 AM

A lonely and scary job for the Lone Shepherd, who must always stay vigilant for the unknown. Well written Victor, and a great analogy. Love and hugs