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The Lone Night Weaver

Silently he weaves his way through nebulous skies Traversing the night for his place in the sunshine Beautiful planet he'd seen once upon a dream, On his breast rests a rose of Sharon of gold streams. The ride is rough as he must avoid shooting stars, Attractive for a time, but mirrored dreams they are, Their fires soon becoming extinguished, gone black Meeting their doom in the vacuum of black holes' trap. Such fatal end becomes a blessing in disguise He learns he must follow a pattern for safe flight He draws power from the sun and the earth's moon Whose lights are constant, a sight he knows not to lose. At long last, near the moon he finds her, his heaven Her light turned brightest gold by the rose of Sharon. By CarolineCecile Copyright © 06.07.11 For Francine Roberts' Sonnet contest.

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Date: 6/16/2011 11:47:00 AM
Quite a celestial ride, Caroline. Glad I could fly along. LOve, daver
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Date: 6/16/2011 11:46:00 AM
Quite a celestial ride, Caroline. Glad I could fly along. LOve, daver
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Date: 6/16/2011 6:42:00 AM
Reminds me of "The Grapes of Wrath" in which one of the characters if "Rose of Sharon". I applaud you for using the diffcult form of the sonnet. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 6/10/2011 6:51:00 PM
Just "beautiful" is the word for this poem, you have woven it sublime, , best of luck in the contest ~~
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Date: 6/10/2011 9:40:00 AM
Dear Caroline, this is so beautiful! The shooting stars are always showering past us and it's so hard to find someone who can make our life complete. Beautiful upbeat ending. I do hope you are doing well, my friend. Feeling a bit better today and am trying to catch up on some comments. Love you, Carolyn
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Date: 6/9/2011 9:40:00 PM
Like the Traveller the sun ever rises, poor old moon looks down n apprises, thinks to herself are they getting any wiser, NOPE Great poem to light the way, Caroline Cécile this i say, xo, Don
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Date: 6/9/2011 6:53:00 PM
what a lovely Sonnet, Caroline. I wish you the best of luck in the contest if it is for such. Thanks you so much for your comment
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Date: 6/9/2011 6:50:00 PM
Thank you for commenting on my latest work. This is a Sonnet of such beauty. Good write.
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Date: 6/9/2011 6:21:00 PM
this was beautifully written. cory
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Date: 6/8/2011 9:39:00 PM
C.C.D., this is very beautiful. I find the nebulous skies beyond all beauty.. It's like the God, who rides through the change in the skies. I love it... thanks for sharing,..p.d.
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Date: 6/7/2011 5:35:00 PM
very creative and well written poem. thank you for commenting on Spending Time.
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Date: 6/7/2011 2:14:00 PM
wrote a coment earlier didnt vote then so i figured i would come back and do so
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Date: 6/7/2011 2:13:00 PM
guided by the sun and the moonslight he finds constancy, and his path to thebrightest gold rose of sharon awaits I read this a few timesand i still feel like an intergalactic wanderer
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