The Lone Boys Brother

Example for my contest :)  

One bright night, early in the morn 
I ate some peas, from a can of corn 
Then I cooked some fish, in my flat gold trimmed bowl 
When I paid too much, for the fish I stole 
Then I played alone, one-on-one 
In my soaking cloths, from the raining sun 
Till someone lost, and beat the other 
And took the crown, from the lone boys brother

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Date: 9/12/2021 4:06:00 AM
Fantastic nonsense! difficult to think of a theme! shall try
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Date: 9/10/2021 5:33:00 PM
Hello Charles ... your humorous verse is certain to have the purists spilling their coffee - thanks for the giggle Charles - Lindsay
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Date: 9/9/2021 11:01:00 PM
Excited to have fun. Sure to try. Have a Good day on Bad Night.
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Date: 9/9/2021 10:24:00 AM
What a fun example, i am always writing nonsense so thanks for the contest lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/8/2021 6:20:00 AM
Clever nonsense, is this, Charles.
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Date: 9/7/2021 12:40:00 PM
Great example Charlie, I'll see what nonsense I can come up with. Tom
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Date: 9/7/2021 8:12:00 AM
Charlie, fun and funny, and a great example for your contest. Oh Charlie my poetic friend, you are taking me far, far out of my comfort zone with this contest theme. But, I will accept your challenge and give it a whirl, a twirl and swirl ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
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Date: 9/7/2021 6:37:00 AM
This is adorable! I love it. I hope I can come up with one. So cute. I'm so bad at humor though!!! Love this. God bless you, Love, Gina
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Date: 9/6/2021 11:14:00 PM
Good one, Charles, love it.
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Date: 9/6/2021 9:58:00 PM
lol These nonsense rhymes are so much fun to read. Takes some clever thought and creativity. Love this Charlie. Well Done. ;) God Bless, JB
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