Contest-The Logic of Longing-sponsor-Ink Empress-8/1/26
With our fervent lucid longing we tried, my love to seduce the stars without a script when my soul bowed to your eternal beauty that glowed softly in our days as lovers sanity was abandoned while quivering in lonely, tethered spaces claiming the right to be loved carrying whispers of unexplained attraction found in ancient sunsets of borrowed ambiance discovered in our eyes of scarlet rapture where we fell to earth with hungry kisses melting our lips from intimate intoxicating elixir causing delirium to burn through the paradise of our fantasy from the white-hot ash of desire to leave scars on the flesh of our memory twisted and turned into an unknown where a torn canvas is two paintings of what could have been to leave us exhausted holding the rusty key to the door of shared longing stained by unfulfilled promise of our imprisonment when we impassioned our souls and found illusion laden with regret
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