The Local Swimming Pool

I passed the local swimming pool
And saw that what remained
Was lots of empty space because
The water had been drained.

Now, I am not a swimmer,
Though I walk by every morn,
Way too early for the crowds of folks
Where bathing suits are worn.

Yet I’m certain they enjoyed it,
Cooling off or doing laps,
While the children played or splashed
With “Marco Polo!” shouts, perhaps.

That’s all finished for the season
And the lifeguards, too, are gone,
Maybe to an indoor gym, where some
Aquatics still go on.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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M  Avatar
September 16, 2025 at 3:38 AM
Love the way you tell a daily life tale about your life Ilene….you do it so well! You have a detailed diary/book of your everyday life….what a great legacy to leave behind one day! Debxx
Wolf Avatar
September 11, 2025 at 7:02 PM
Yep. Soon to be filled with falling leaves. Sigh.
Godwin Avatar
September 9, 2025 at 11:04 PM
Well done. To me the poem tries hard not to be blatantly gloomy, but the speculative tone throughout was befittingly, poetically gray. I enjoyed your poem. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Canerdy Avatar
September 9, 2025 at 5:35 PM
Ilene, you have aptly and movingly described one of the changes brought about by the near-end of summer. Janice
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