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The Loan

My thought was our love Was to big to fail That we had more than enough Until I found out It didn't last long All on account Of the pressures we had That started to mount What I had banked on What I thought we both had I failed to use The proper math And now that it's gone I wish I had known That when we gave each other our hearts It was only a loan

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 11/13/2018 1:56:00 PM
Aww - well penned, Mike.
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Date: 6/4/2016 10:25:00 PM
Nice poetic symbolism there Mike…and sad!
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