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"The Living Soul Retrieved"
The spine is bound Inside the pages with each turn a new leaf the living soul is retrieved Inside the pages there is heartache and grace the living soul is retrieved imprisoned, innocent footprints are traced There is heartache and grace to judge inverted another’s crimes and place imprisoned, innocent footprints are traced she turns behind to see in his eyes her face To judge inverted another’s crimes and place She sees a child full of hurt and fear’s disgrace She turns forward to see in another’s eyes her face Blue Sky’s white doves beat at windows, Pain's for escape She sees a child full of hurt and fear’s disgrace The prodigy between two people, the truth is seen for what it truly is Blue Sky’s white doves beat at windows, Pain’s for escape Pages of conflict nobody has won in the bad dream The prodigy between two people, the truth is seen for what it truly is The Book slowly opens invisible the hand to receive Pages of conflict nobody has won in the bad dream The child looks to Heaven, the Christmas of her life begins to be sung from new seeds The Book slowly opens invisible the hand to receive Sensate the Soul begins its dream, walls of a book papered from torn bark a Blue Ghost tree bleeds The child looks to Heaven, the Christmas of her life begins to be sung from new seeds Red courses through each leaf, her beating heart, delivered through veins of faith and belief The spine is strong with Love it is bound never broken, it is read beginning to end, seen and heard, it is sound the living soul in its truth, there is found (LadyLabyrinth/2019) for my daughter, Georgia, Christmas 2019 with love, your mother.
“The Book of My Life” / Sting https://youtu.be/pBu_EKugl_Q "Feather in the Wind" / Mindy Gledhill https://youtu.be/b2_ILTd91OU

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Date: 12/22/2019 10:05:00 AM
The depths, beauty and grace within this poem awe me. Yes life is precious, love is truth and light. Motherhood is a wondrous blessing and humanity desperately needs poetry such as is this gem my friend. God bless, and Merry Christmas Wishes to you and yours. A fav..
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 12/22/2019 3:04:00 PM
Merry Christmas to you and your family Robert, may it be peaceful, safe and full of love and joy. Leanne x
Date: 12/15/2019 5:51:00 PM
I love the form that you chose L...the repeated lines in the Pantoum really hit home the message...the spine is strong and holds all the truths
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Date: 12/15/2019 9:06:00 PM
Merry Christmas V.S.A.M. xx
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 12/15/2019 8:40:00 PM
It is not an easy form to write, but then some books are harder to write, just as Life is not easy for some. Anything for those one loves the most, is worth great effort, concentration and the free form discipline of a pantoum at Christmas. Merry Christmas to you and yours V.S.A.S. x
Date: 12/15/2019 5:02:00 PM
God bless all the people whose pages have not been written. Wonderful poem. Have a great day my friend
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 12/15/2019 5:07:00 PM
thumbs up McHattie. thank you. Merry Christmas. you need to put some clothes on...

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