The Living Guitar

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The Living Guitar The guitar chords strum “BLOWNLY” in deep throbbing tones, vibrating with their ending, like a heart that moans. The guitar strings wine ‘’GWENNDDA” to our receptive ears. And with their soothing melody, they ease our wanton fears. The guitar clip is “SQUEALING’’ short quick skidding sounds. That cross the strings so rapidly no echo is ever found. The guitar is like a woman, who with her shapely curves, sings a cerci song, to generate the verve. 2/8/17

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Joanna Daniel

Date: 2/9/2017 4:00:00 AM

Loved this one, Janis, two different perspectives from the same guitar:) a 7:)

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 2/9/2017 5:22:00 PM

Thanks for the rating and your appreciation.

Phillip Garcia

Date: 2/8/2017 5:29:00 PM

I enjoyed this take on the picture. It's different in a good way (which I can't quite put my finger on). Well worth the read and a great write. GWENNDDDAAA

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 2/9/2017 5:28:00 PM

Thanks, Phillip. I appreciate your comments. Love your avatar.