The Lives of Scorpio Women

Magnetic, alluring and appealing,
Scorpio women attract paramours
without revealing the inner core
of themselves,

The dark side of themselves that
no one sees when they are alone,

The criticisms of self and unfullfilled
expectations, makes their world spin 
around into oblivion,

Fiercely devoted, to the people
that matter, with lofty ideals which
make them respond like mad hatters,

The free spirits roam through their
lives, hoping to find the mysteries
to their contradictions,

The burden of these vixens always
lies in trusting their hearts to find
their soul mates......
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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January 25, 2012 at 6:47 PM
I don't believe you can make a generalization like this about all Scorpio women. There are always at least a few exceptions. Good descriptiveness here. Just correct one misspelled word: "feircely" is correctly spelled "fiercely".
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