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The Little Brown Moth and Me

wings beating frantically against the shower window, wasting an entire existence denied by an invisible wall

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Bukang Liwayway

Date: 3/20/2013 10:58:00 AM

very awesome write my friend Tim, you make me smile after reading your poem before I sleep today. Congratulations on your win.. Hugs, Maria :)

Donna Jones

Date: 3/20/2013 7:55:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Tim....Donna

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/19/2013 8:56:00 AM

Nothing worse than a moth with wet wings!! Unless it's a fly in your soup!

Seren Roberts

Date: 3/19/2013 7:21:00 AM

awww sorry moth ...splatttt... Seren

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/18/2013 6:44:00 PM

Hi Tim Congratulations :-) with your nice and wonderful winning free verse poem~ Always & Forever* PD

Timothy Hicks

Date: 3/12/2013 10:39:00 AM

Wow Tim this was cool! I could really sympathize with that poor moths struggle and the very vivid description in the first four lines. Living so short a life only to be denied by an invisible wall... there is definitely something to be learned from that even in real human life!