The Lightning Bolt From Hell

Lightning, seemingly from hell
rained down on us one summer eve.
We expected to hear the death bell 
toll as fire and brimstone we perceive.

We were scattered about the house
not accustomed to cringing at nature
The lightning popped constantly close
Reducing us minute by minute in stature.

When suddenly there was a crash
A loud boom and thunder roared
As a ball of electrified fire zoomed
through the screen porch and door.

It had hit the transformer pole outside,
Slid down the guy wire to the ground
hopped and skipped across green tide
before entering the house with sound

Sizzling, through the living room and hall
through the double wide door of dinette
making a hole the size of a basketball
by the kitchen door was as far as it could get.

The acrid smell was most too much to bear.
Left by the lightning bolt straight from hell
As it awarded destruction without want of care.
To give me a bit of nature, I remember well. 

©   Jun 21 2010 For John's "Fear" contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
June 24, 2010 at 8:55 PM
Quite the fearful tale you have here, good luck in this contest. Stranger than fiction! LUv, Andrea
Brown Avatar
June 22, 2010 at 5:40 AM
It is a pleasure to be reading your poetry this morning Charles. Wishing you a wonderful day filled with an overload of inspiration. Hoping you will challenge yourself to use all the inspiration which you may receive today. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
June 21, 2010 at 6:43 PM
You have presented fear in a nice perspective. Good luck in the contest
Kendrick Avatar
June 21, 2010 at 2:43 PM
That is scary when that happens ...We had lightining hit here about eleven years ago and it tore up everything electonic in the house..Computers, telephones, televisions, clocks, touch lamps, thank 'God that we had insurance that covered part of it.Of course, it could not pay for fear which I experienced....Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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June 21, 2010 at 2:40 PM
deep write Charles, with something like that of course it's hard to forget...P.D.
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