Home » Poems » Brandy Nicole » The Lightest Touch

Brandy Nicole | + Follow Poet |

The Lightest Touch

Poet's Notes

(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Brandy Nicole.

Art by Robert Duvall ~Emotional Dance

a soft caress is like beauty dancing so close to you and me the lightest touch i embrace stars always floating through space as silk feels upon the skin elegant and smooth again a soft caress is like beauty dancing so close to you and me grace will allow lovers to sway a melody of breaths that stay wrapped in paradise with you escape in those eyes so true capture and pull me under you are a touch of wonder grace will allow lovers to sway a melody of breaths that stay on the dance floor emotions glide longing to linger at your side and move as an angel fair dreaming you will hold me there your touch is so light and free as my love for you will be on the dance floor emotions glide longing to linger at your side *************** ~ to always be this close ~ * a little scribble about love * Form of Poetry- Octelle The syllable count structure for this verse is 8, 8, 7, 7, 7, 7, 8, 8, and the rhyme scheme is aa/bb/cc/aa. The first two lines and the last two lines are identical.

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Joseph May

Date: 9/24/2023 8:01:00 PM

A soft caress make "emotions glide"to the melody of heartbeats, Lovely write Brandy, Hugs

Brandy Nicole
Date: 9/25/2023 7:29:00 PM

When the melody revolves around love, tiny flutters caress the heart. Thank you Joseph, for your lovely comment. Hugs to you as well. :) Brandy

John Watt

Date: 6/22/2020 7:36:00 PM

Brandy, I feel the music in this one, moving two hearts as one. Your words have such a great groove to them, and you write from the heart about love and melody and paradise like no one else. Enjoyed this very much! Blessings be yours today! Hugs ~ John

Brandy Nicole
Date: 6/22/2020 8:29:00 PM

The melody is beautiful, around these words of mine. Thank you John. Such a wonderful thing to say. Your thoughts always uplift the heart. I appreciate you. My best to you, my dear friend. Hugs, Brandy

Ashok Kumar Mishra

Date: 12/23/2019 12:05:00 PM

Hey Brandy, you had penned such a beautiful poetry! The words sequence flowing such a mesmerising way, I wish you add more to this! You are romantic!

Brandy Nicole
Date: 12/23/2019 6:54:00 PM

Thank you Ashok. Such a wonderful compliment. Your kind words are greatly appreciated. More could certainly be added to this. :) Brandy

John Gondolf

Date: 8/29/2018 4:36:00 AM

Back for seconds on this one. This poem flows so smoothly as if it was gliding across the dance floor itself. This is a beautiful piece of poetry, Brandy.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/29/2018 12:46:00 PM

Thank you John. You coming back to read and comment on this poem again, means so much. You humble me. I appreciate you and your thoughts. :) Brandy

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 8/13/2018 8:26:00 PM

Oh, this is wonderful, and such a great topic ... I have not tried this form, but you have presented it with passion and delightful imagery! I was a dance escort many years ago, getting paid for something I loved and would have done anyway - great times, (and I fell in love with a ballerina, who haunts me still). This is going into my favs, and I am picky with those). Blessings! :-) <3

Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/13/2018 10:05:00 PM

Letting our words dance, this is what we as poets do. And I love creating such a breathtaking moment- or mood. Maybe it likes tangling around me. :) Thank you for adding this poem to your favorites. For your wonderful comment as well. Your kindness is appreciated. ~ Brandy

David Stearns

Date: 8/12/2018 12:15:00 AM

Makes me want to go dancing! Words meld together with such grace. "emotions glide longing to linger at your side" so effortlessly elegant!

Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/12/2018 5:38:00 PM

:) Awe, then maybe you should go dancing. (Soft smile) Thank you David for your kind words. I like this line too. Closeness I will always crave. ~ Brandy

Arturo Michael

Date: 8/9/2018 9:17:00 AM

A love dance...with lovely imagery...All the best Brandy

Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/9/2018 1:04:00 PM

Thank you Arturo. Your thoughts are appreciated. My best to you as well. ~ Brandy

Tim Smith

Date: 8/8/2018 7:47:00 PM

Very beautiful as always Brandy

Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/8/2018 8:48:00 PM

Thank you Tim!!! Your thoughts are always appreciated. ~ Brandy

Charles Messina

Date: 8/8/2018 6:41:00 PM

This is beautiful, Brandy! A soft caress is beauty! Your words have much meaning to them, and you always speak from your heart. I'm smiling :) Charlie

Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/8/2018 8:47:00 PM

:) I am smiling too Charlie. Thank you for your lovely comment. Your thoughts hold tenderness. ~ Brandy

Mark Toney

Date: 8/8/2018 3:32:00 PM

Brandy, thank you for the gift. With this poem you have captured every dance I've ever had with my wife :) It has to be a FAV for me. You have also brought us 3 new poetry forms to the Soup, and I have to say that I like this one the best. I'll have to try this one soon. Much appreciated.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/8/2018 8:43:00 PM

You are very welcome Mark, and I like this form too. You can write one stanza, or as many as you wish. How sweet that these words wrap around you, and moments shared with your wife. :) I am sure you will be able to master this form. ~ Brandy

Winged Warrior

Date: 8/8/2018 7:25:00 AM

Your poetic execution...divine words that soothe the soul...love & light...^WW^

Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/8/2018 11:50:00 AM

Such a wonderful thing to say Winged Warrior. :) Your kind words are appreciated. ~ Brandy

John Gondolf

Date: 8/7/2018 10:32:00 PM

My emotions glide as your words dance across my page and they will linger into the night. Another beautiful sensual poem from your heart. Thank you for sharing it with us.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/8/2018 11:43:00 AM

Thank you John. Emotions should always glide and touch the heart. The beautiful and romantic ones- anyway. :) Your thoughts are appreciated. ~ Brandy

Susan Ashley

Date: 8/7/2018 9:50:00 PM

This wondrous poetry form is the perfect frame for your elegant, delicate, sensually light and lovely poem, Brandy. Your romantic poetic lines seem to dance on air with wispy graceful ease.. Beautiful! Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan

Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/7/2018 10:17:00 PM

Dear Susan, you truly humble me with your thoughts. I am a simple woman simply writing from the heart. Such a wonderful thing to say about me and my poetry. Thank you doesn't seem enough. ~ Brandy

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 8/7/2018 8:37:00 PM

Being totally tactile myself, this poem reminds me how much touch means to some of us. This is beautifully done, Brandy.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/7/2018 9:22:00 PM

Yes, touch is very important- and it is needed. Thank you Caren for your kind words. ~ Brandy