The Light Within Earshot at the Gas Station Snack Bar

Our oldest light goes by the name cosmic 
microwave background radiation—
CMB for short. She's everywhere: 
fluorescent birdsong of modern offices, 
hum of corner store ice cream cases. 
Have you heard of her? This gal was born 
screaming into freedom from the expansion 
of a bang so big we're still talking about it. 

Expelled from the recombination's gender-
less cervix, before there were names for things 
like body, or heat, or quiet. She slid through 
the pitch of first dark, not yet sure what 
edges were, dragging the weight of a beginning 
behind, shelter for and shedding of photons 
loosened from a fire she didn't start.

Somewhere in this thirteen-billion-year drift 
her lips kissed the eyelids of stars that hadn’t 
learned to die yet, passed the chubby fists 
of planets still cooling in their cribs. Fell into gravity 
wells, bent her spine around a gape of black holes,
and climbed back up again, tired but full.

We call her background now, like she's an afterthought,
the hum of hums beneath the humming—we call her 'it'.
Add a T to her beginning and we might as well 
call her mother. And when she reaches us, frail 
and stretched thin, we catch her in our instruments 
(where we found her), our desperate, outstretched hands. 

For our effort, like a good genie enduring a bad rub, 
she tells the story of our origin from a certain point—
then distracts us with tricks when we ask her about 
the end of it.

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Date: 12/8/2024 10:09:00 AM
Wow, great title, great poem, and a well-deserved POTD!!! Thanks for sharing!
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Date: 12/8/2024 1:20:00 PM
Thanks, Benjamin. Titles are my favorite and most hated parts of writing a piece xD Some land better than others that's for sure. Have a great day :)
Date: 12/8/2024 6:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win.   Have a blessed day with your win....................
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Date: 12/8/2024 1:20:00 PM
Thanks, Paula.
Date: 12/8/2024 2:45:00 AM
Congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the day with this wonderful write Jaymee… Beryl
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Date: 12/8/2024 1:19:00 PM
Thanks, Beryl. This one gave me a lot of satisfaction to write. Nice change of pace for me from more personal work.
Date: 12/7/2024 6:33:00 PM
' her lips kissed the eyelids of stars. ' This thought alone, is poetry in motion. Congratulations Jaymee, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 12/8/2024 1:19:00 PM
Well now you're just blowing up my head :D Thank you for taking the time to make such a meaningful comment.
Date: 12/7/2024 2:32:00 PM
You have described The Beginning so well that it sounds like an astrophysicist write your poem. I enjoy the scientific background with a question at the end. Congratulations on POTD. This is a poignant poem for today's searches in space.
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Date: 12/8/2024 1:18:00 PM
Dang, Hilda, that is some high praise. Thank you so much for such a kind comment.
Date: 12/7/2024 9:54:00 AM
Your profound and enticing very exciting origins of the universe, metaphysics class? Amazing, Jaimee! Always yearn to make the imponderable ponderable with Big bang theories! I've heard of the humming noise and used it in my liminal spaces, always I wondered why birdsong is whiter than white and I know there are gravity hills as well as gravity wells. Congratulations on a most deserved POTD! You've re-defined gravity! :)
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Date: 12/8/2024 1:17:00 PM
Thank you for such a thoughtful comment. Have a lovely afternoon :)
Date: 12/7/2024 9:44:00 AM
Fascinating take on the theme. Enjoy your day in the sun
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Jaymee Thomas
Date: 12/8/2024 1:16:00 PM
Thanks, Tom. This was a really satisfying write for me, although I couldn't tell you why. It was a good prompt for sure.
Date: 12/7/2024 9:32:00 AM
Excellent write, imagines well done. Congratulations on POTD.
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Date: 12/8/2024 1:16:00 PM
Thanks, Eve. I really enjoyed writing for this prompt.
Date: 12/7/2024 9:26:00 AM
Back with congratulations Jaymee on a totalling deserving and all consuming POTD, cheers David
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Date: 12/8/2024 1:15:00 PM
Haha! Heyyyyy, welcome back :)
Date: 12/7/2024 8:18:00 AM
Very nicely done, Congrats on POTD
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Date: 12/8/2024 1:14:00 PM
Thanks, Joseph. It came from a prompt that I really liked.
Date: 12/7/2024 6:09:00 AM
Excellent write! Congrats on POTD! Especially enjoyed the imagery in verse three!
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Date: 12/8/2024 1:14:00 PM
Thank you, Kim. I sure appreciate you taking the time to comment. Have a wonderful afternoon.
Date: 12/7/2024 4:58:00 AM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Jaymee :) - hugs
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Date: 12/7/2024 6:16:00 PM
Thanks so much :)
Date: 12/7/2024 3:24:00 AM
Jaymee, a great poem, congratulations on POTD.
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Date: 12/7/2024 6:16:00 PM
I appreciate it, Tania. Thank you :)
Date: 12/7/2024 12:33:00 AM
Quite a thought provoking verse Jaymee, congratulations on today's POTD honour. Tom
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Date: 12/7/2024 6:15:00 PM
Thanks, Tom.
Date: 12/6/2024 10:20:00 AM
The gal is a complex piece of work Jaymee and totally underrated, she has left her mark on mankind for sure, not sure this one is a macrocosm/microcosm or vice versa analogy, doesn’t matter it’s a great poem, strange you mentioned the birdsong, because that’s what the scientists thought they were hearing when they stumbled on CMB while doing a completely unrelated experiment, some pigeons and (Chicks) had nested in their detector, who’d have thought it lol! Brilliant piece, Cheers David
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Date: 12/6/2024 10:58:00 AM
(Sh!t happened)
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Jaymee Thomas
Date: 12/6/2024 10:40:00 AM
I'm so glad you caught that! Penzias and Wilson won the Nobel Prize in Physics for that discovery during my lifetime, so I grew up hearing about it :) I took a bit of license, and left out references to the "white dielectric material" (pigeon poop), but only because it's not as poetic as birdsong xD
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