The Light Within Earshot at the Gas Station Snack Bar

Our oldest light goes by the name cosmic 
microwave background radiation—
CMB for short. She's everywhere: 
fluorescent birdsong of modern offices, 
hum of corner store ice cream cases. 
Have you heard of her? This gal was born 
screaming into freedom from the expansion 
of a bang so big we're still talking about it. 

Expelled from the recombination's gender-
less cervix, before there were names for things 
like body, or heat, or quiet. She slid through 
the pitch of first dark, not yet sure what 
edges were, dragging the weight of a beginning 
behind, shelter for and shedding of photons 
loosened from a fire she didn't start.

Somewhere in this thirteen-billion-year drift 
her lips kissed the eyelids of stars that hadn’t 
learned to die yet, passed the chubby fists 
of planets still cooling in their cribs. Fell into gravity 
wells, bent her spine around a gape of black holes,
and climbed back up again, tired but full.

We call her background now, like she's an afterthought,
the hum of hums beneath the humming—we call her 'it'.
Add a T to her beginning and we might as well 
call her mother. And when she reaches us, frail 
and stretched thin, we catch her in our instruments 
(where we found her), our desperate, outstretched hands. 

For our effort, like a good genie enduring a bad rub, 
she tells the story of our origin from a certain point—
then distracts us with tricks when we ask her about 
the end of it.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Bartley Avatar
December 8, 2024 at 10:09 AM
Wow, great title, great poem, and a well-deserved POTD!!! Thanks for sharing!
Thomas Avatar
December 8, 2024 at 1:20 PM
Thanks, Benjamin. Titles are my favorite and most hated parts of writing a piece xD Some land better than others that's for sure. Have a great day :)
Goldsmith Avatar
December 8, 2024 at 6:57 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win.   Have a blessed day with your win....................
Thomas Avatar
December 8, 2024 at 1:20 PM
Thanks, Paula.
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December 8, 2024 at 2:45 AM
Congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the day with this wonderful write Jaymee… Beryl
Thomas Avatar
December 8, 2024 at 1:19 PM
Thanks, Beryl. This one gave me a lot of satisfaction to write. Nice change of pace for me from more personal work.
Nicole Avatar
December 7, 2024 at 6:33 PM
' her lips kissed the eyelids of stars. ' This thought alone, is poetry in motion. Congratulations Jaymee, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
Thomas Avatar
December 8, 2024 at 1:19 PM
Well now you're just blowing up my head :D Thank you for taking the time to make such a meaningful comment.
Greenhough Avatar
December 7, 2024 at 2:32 PM
You have described The Beginning so well that it sounds like an astrophysicist write your poem. I enjoy the scientific background with a question at the end. Congratulations on POTD. This is a poignant poem for today's searches in space.
Thomas Avatar
December 8, 2024 at 1:18 PM
Dang, Hilda, that is some high praise. Thank you so much for such a kind comment.
Anaya Avatar
December 7, 2024 at 9:54 AM
Your profound and enticing very exciting origins of the universe, metaphysics class? Amazing, Jaimee! Always yearn to make the imponderable ponderable with Big bang theories! I've heard of the humming noise and used it in my liminal spaces, always I wondered why birdsong is whiter than white and I know there are gravity hills as well as gravity wells. Congratulations on a most deserved POTD! You've re-defined gravity! :)
Thomas Avatar
December 8, 2024 at 1:17 PM
Thank you for such a thoughtful comment. Have a lovely afternoon :)
Roper Avatar
December 7, 2024 at 9:32 AM
Excellent write, imagines well done. Congratulations on POTD.
Thomas Avatar
December 8, 2024 at 1:16 PM
Thanks, Eve. I really enjoyed writing for this prompt.
Kavanagh  Avatar
December 7, 2024 at 9:26 AM
Back with congratulations Jaymee on a totalling deserving and all consuming POTD, cheers David
Thomas Avatar
December 8, 2024 at 1:15 PM
Haha! Heyyyyy, welcome back :)
May Avatar
December 7, 2024 at 8:18 AM
Very nicely done, Congrats on POTD
Thomas Avatar
December 8, 2024 at 1:14 PM
Thanks, Joseph. It came from a prompt that I really liked.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 7, 2024 at 6:09 AM
Excellent write! Congrats on POTD! Especially enjoyed the imagery in verse three!
Thomas Avatar
December 8, 2024 at 1:14 PM
Thank you, Kim. I sure appreciate you taking the time to comment. Have a wonderful afternoon.
Andresen Avatar
December 7, 2024 at 4:58 AM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Jaymee :) - hugs
Thomas Avatar
December 7, 2024 at 6:16 PM
Thanks so much :)
Kitchin Avatar
December 7, 2024 at 3:24 AM
Jaymee, a great poem, congratulations on POTD.
Thomas Avatar
December 7, 2024 at 6:16 PM
I appreciate it, Tania. Thank you :)
Cunningham Avatar
December 7, 2024 at 12:33 AM
Quite a thought provoking verse Jaymee, congratulations on today's POTD honour. Tom
Thomas Avatar
December 7, 2024 at 6:15 PM
Thanks, Tom.
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December 6, 2024 at 10:20 AM
The gal is a complex piece of work Jaymee and totally underrated, she has left her mark on mankind for sure, not sure this one is a macrocosm/microcosm or vice versa analogy, doesn’t matter it’s a great poem, strange you mentioned the birdsong, because that’s what the scientists thought they were hearing when they stumbled on CMB while doing a completely unrelated experiment, some pigeons and (Chicks) had nested in their detector, who’d have thought it lol! Brilliant piece, Cheers David
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December 6, 2024 at 10:58 AM
(Sh!t happened)
Thomas Avatar
December 6, 2024 at 10:40 AM
I'm so glad you caught that! Penzias and Wilson won the Nobel Prize in Physics for that discovery during my lifetime, so I grew up hearing about it :) I took a bit of license, and left out references to the "white dielectric material" (pigeon poop), but only because it's not as poetic as birdsong xD
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