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Author's Notes: "The light of a candle," is a new free verse that my wife, Ingrid, and I just completed on August 29, 2017. The theme and poetic essence of this particular verse should be readily apparent to the reader, especially from a metaphorical perspective. The ready contrast and comparison between the light and the dark both frame the spiritual and symbolic nature of the message of the simple light of a small candle and the pureness it represents with the "Flame of Eternity," in relation to the all-important role it plays in saving mankind and the Earth from the specter of total darkness. (Gary Bateman - August 31, 2017) (Free Verse)

Categories: analogy, earth, god, heart, inspiration, spiritual, and symbolism.

The Light of a Candle

The light of a candle

The light of a candle
Can light up
The dark corners of a room
The darkness of a heart
The dark night of a soul.
The simple light of a small candle
Reminds us
In its pureness
Of the Flame of Eternity
As the savior from all darkness on Earth.

Gary Bateman and Ingrid Krukenberg-Bateman
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August 29, 2017 (Free Verse)

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Susan Ashley

October 27, 2017 at 9:35 PM

Such a beautiful, comforting and spiritual write Gary and Ingrid. The light of your words illuminated me this evening... Enjoyed!

Gary Bateman

October 27, 2017 at 10:17 PM

Thanks Susan very much!! I will let Ingrid know that you commented on our co-written selection here. All the best, and continued best wishes from both of us!! Cheers, Gary

Laura Breidenthal

September 6, 2017 at 3:13 PM

Hello Gary! It's good to be back to your page. Your work is always so fascinating. It's amazing what a little light can do, much less the majestic flame of our future. I wish you well in all of your plans for the new book! Sounds so exciting, and thank you for the last comments on my work! Always, Laura

Gary Bateman

September 6, 2017 at 6:08 PM

Hello Laura!! It also great to hear from you again. Yes, I've been working on a number of eclectic themes with my poetry, to include my other work with short stories and two novellas I've been working on from time-to-time. I will be by again soon to take a look at your poetry. Keep Writing and keep having fun doing it!! Cheers and Best Wishes, Gary

Silent One

September 6, 2017 at 8:36 AM

Wonderful poem and true... yet a flame is so fragile and a candle never lasts forever.. Really enjoyed your poem my friend..

Gary Bateman

September 6, 2017 at 12:30 PM

Thanks Silent One!! Your words describe everything perfectly here. Ingrid and I are very glad you liked this special poem. Best Wishes Always, Gary

Dorian Petersen Potter

September 1, 2017 at 3:24 PM

Hi G and Ingrid!:)A very beautiful, uplifting , spiritual, inspirational poem, you've painted here my very dear friends Gary and Ingrid.Just awesome!Very beautifully written in the Free Verse style.Outstanding piece! Excellent collaboration!I enjoyed it !Golden pens!A 7 + + + to each !A fav.Sending my love n' prayers to you and Ingrid, as always:))Take very good care of each other now.All the best to you both always G! Spill ink!:))Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light God bless you always!:)D

Gary Bateman

September 1, 2017 at 8:28 PM

Hello D!! Thanks very much, on behalf of both Ingrid and me, for your wondrous comments here -- as always. We are both very pleased that you like our spiritual-inspirational verse here. The idea for this one came principally from Ingrid. She has a very strong affinity for topics/themes of this genre. And, thanks too for the TR/FAVE!! Spill Ink Too!! Our Best Wishes for the Weekend!! Cheers and Best, G!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

September 1, 2017 at 2:17 AM

- Beautiful Ingrid and Gary :) - We light candles for love and peace - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BUEVWu54-8o - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman

September 1, 2017 at 6:06 AM

Dear Anne-Lise, Thanks for your note here. Ingrid and I always appreciate hearing from you. We will need to check out the "You Tube" link you've provided above. Have a great weekend, and continued best wishes!! Cheers and Best, Gary

Winged Warrior

August 31, 2017 at 6:51 PM

Beautifully penned my friend...I'm reading your poem by candle light...god bless...^WW^

Gary Bateman

August 31, 2017 at 7:27 PM

Thanks very much WW!! We both really appreciate your comment and very kind words here. Ah yes . . . the light of a candle can help light the way for all of us!! Cheers and Best Wishes, Gary