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The light

Still remember
The stabbed of your
Sucking heart, left a scar
Within; a scar that never
Heal, but grown deeper
To an abyss. I tried hard to fill,
But it was futile.

Stupefaction and solitude
Have some-time made
The sun to sink within cloud.
Now, season change to dry;
The sun shines aglow and
Her mantle as twilight never go astray,

But the spike still prompt;
Makes me hurt the innocent heart.
Hope the light comes soon
And my memories fade soon


Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Date: 8/30/2015 3:14:00 PM
Afolab,this dark piece grabbed my attention instantly. You expressed the feelings of pain and loneliness really well. The light will come my fiend.Good job!:-) Alexis 7
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Date: 8/30/2015 1:26:00 PM
how lauis is this, afolabi, and i like the metaphors you used to capture the loneliness expressed through yourwonderful work!.. hugggs
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Date: 8/29/2015 6:44:00 PM
A very intriguing write. An introspective lense that captures the reader. Likes!
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Date: 8/29/2015 2:11:00 PM
just amazing in its essence, afolabi.. well done!
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Afolabi Muideen
Date: 8/30/2015 3:14:00 PM
Thank you Emile for dropped by to read and comment to my page..........A.M.
Date: 8/28/2015 10:19:00 AM
A somewhat surreal over the edge mixture of emotions that speak of discontentment within the author's sphere of influence. Emile.
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Date: 8/27/2015 4:45:00 AM
introspective write Afolabi.. :) blessings to you always!~Olive Eloisa =')
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Afolabi Muideen
Date: 8/30/2015 3:01:00 PM
Thank you very much for your pleasant comment.........A.M.
Date: 8/26/2015 1:01:00 PM
A deeply emotive write, AM. A new day always comes after the darkness in the night, with it the sun and the real light. Lookout, you do not wish to regret having let go the one who got away. Most of the time they are those whom you see everyday, at work, where you live, but don't notice. God bless! hugs! (PS. You might want to remove the extra "e" from "hard" at line 5. :-)
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Date: 8/30/2015 3:10:00 PM
abundant grace KIM, am a lot grateful to you for your pleasant comment and your hand. Thanks........A.M.