James Peranteau Poet Free verse

The Lift of Her Curse

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 Such a rash stimulus before
             mine eyes
 which has caused the naïve 
                 reach
                 from
            the likes of i

        Though each day 
             (it seems)
               buffoon 
winks back at me through the
          reflective pane
 a jocund feeling over comes
                  me
   almost becoming ecstatic

      It has many of times
               caused
             the jingle
             yes as in
       rhyme and verse
                 yes
  many passionate words
        from the lift of

             her curse

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Elizabeth Wesley September 28, 2011 at 11:16 PM Although I'm not ecstatic when looking in the mirror, I am glad for what I still have and you remind me that's how we need to accept ourselves.

Daver Austin July 23, 2011 at 4:03 PM Ah yes - a study in comparisons, or do I misread? I, myself, am capable of passionate words. Alas, at my age, words is about it. The "reflective pane" has spoken. Love, daver

Andrea Dietrich July 20, 2011 at 10:12 PM well, thanks for that footnote, James with the little winkers! haha. It does indeed cause many passionate words! thanks for your comments today. It's always nice to hear from you and see you posting.

Doris Culverhouse July 20, 2011 at 6:59 PM witty write....thanks for your encouragement!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 20, 2011 at 6:57 PM as always a dynamic insightful poem James.. invigorates the reader ... so appreciate your wonderful words to me as they touch my heart and soul so deeply my friend... being recognized by fellow peers is the most exhilarating feeling in the Universe.. it is like being saved all over again.. u understand ... as these word contain scents of passion and culpability as well as renewal... u are a treasure luv..thankxx....

Carolyn Devonshire July 20, 2011 at 4:29 PM Dear James, having just passed another birthday, I can relate to the "curse" in the mirror. LOL Your poem about the toll of years on our bodies made me giggle. There are many types of "passion" and I love the way you wove your message in this verse. I have been away the past week. Back home now and hope to catch up on more reading. Love you, Carolyn

Elaine George July 20, 2011 at 1:10 PM Very deep and profound an moving, James. Wonderful writing. Thank you for sharing. James, I wish to thank you so very much for your kind comments today .Elaine

Carol Sunshine Brown July 20, 2011 at 6:53 AM I have read your poetry today and in my mind it is an interesting and magnificent piece James. I will return again soon to read more of your writings. Love, Carol

Wilma Neels July 20, 2011 at 5:05 AM Love it James and thanks for the footnote as well :) Hope your week is a great one :) lfde Wilma

Poet Tacito July 20, 2011 at 4:51 AM James, this was truly deep. Very well done sir!