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The Life of My Time

I saw a ghost tonight. Something trying to see me. A figure of dark and pale light Asking to be free I saw something tonight That I cannot explain Something of both fire and ice Something untamed I saw a ghost tonight Asking me to leave Demanding the life of my time Assessing the soul inside me I saw a ghost tonight It made me follow its path It moved straight through the brick wall At where the mirror hangs over the hearth I saw a ghost tonight As it turned to see me In the mirror it looked deep into my eyes. The ghost I saw was me.

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Date: 4/30/2022 2:47:00 PM
Powerful piece, well worked. Flows well and not too long Also poignant. Makes one think, question, which is a hallmark of a good poem. Regards David in NZ
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Date: 5/1/2022 2:19:00 AM
Hi David, thank you very much. I think that the biggest demon we face in life is the one within us. Cheers.

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