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For The Contest, "The Spiritual Gem Inside Me"

Sponsor, Mystic Rose Rose

The Life of Death

It takes its stand the moment we are born;
first breath of life invites its rival, death,
to hand in hand walk on a path that leads,
without exception, to life's certain end.

The cloud of death does shadow all of us
until it strikes...obscure, the why or when. 
Expected, accidental, or by choice;
the cycle never fails from start to end.

The older we become, the more aware
of death's awaiting stage we come to be,
as friends and family take hold its hand,
bid life goodbye and watch their circle close.

Life is a borrowed gem, a wondrous gift,
so like a rose that buds, then fully blooms
until at last, it withers in the end 
as life and death, their dual chorus sings.

We may live on through afterlife, so clear
for those who do believe, God takes us home.
But also through our children, like the rose,
rebirth, new life comes forth to start again.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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mysore Avatar
July 5, 2025 at 10:48 PM
'Life is a borrowed gem, a wondrous gift' beautiful thought dear poet. congratulations on your win. Cheers!!!
Rose  Avatar
July 4, 2025 at 7:09 PM
Your words are a gem in itself Sandra, congrats on your win
Gauthier Avatar
June 15, 2018 at 9:43 AM
Back with more congrats on your win, Sandra.
Barry-Nishanian Avatar
April 12, 2018 at 9:50 PM
Enjoyed. Congrats...bbn
Haight Avatar
April 14, 2018 at 2:02 PM
Thank you so much, Barbara, for your visit and supportive comments. Sandra
Neumann Avatar
April 10, 2018 at 2:32 AM
Congratulations on your win. I have five children and three step-children, so I must be okay on that score...
Haight Avatar
April 10, 2018 at 7:24 PM
Good for you, Kai! You will live on wonderfully! Thanks for the visit and congrats! Much appreciated. Sandra
Gauthier Avatar
April 9, 2018 at 11:57 AM
Back with most deserved congrats, Sandra.
Haight Avatar
April 9, 2018 at 2:44 PM
Thank you again, Line! Hugs, Sandra
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April 9, 2018 at 12:55 AM
Congratulations, Sandra on your win with such a beautiful poem on death.
Haight Avatar
April 9, 2018 at 2:43 PM
Thank you, Subimal! Hugs, Sandra
Gondolf Avatar
April 8, 2018 at 7:26 AM
The thought that death walks hand in hand with life awaiting its moment, something to ponder. Nicely written, Sandra, congrats on your win. John
Haight Avatar
April 9, 2018 at 2:40 PM
Thank you, John, for your uplifting comments and congrats! I appreciate your visits and supports so much. Sandra
Gentry Avatar
April 7, 2018 at 8:28 PM
Congratulations on your win with this beautifully written poem of life to death. Very tender and real. Excellent.
Haight Avatar
April 9, 2018 at 2:39 PM
Once again, Susan, I am so appreciative of your visits and very supportive and uplifting comments! Hugs, Sandra
Roper Avatar
April 7, 2018 at 10:05 AM
Congratulations on your win, Sandra ! Hugs Eve ~`*
Haight Avatar
April 9, 2018 at 2:38 PM
Thank you very much, Eve! Hugs, Sandra
May Avatar
April 6, 2018 at 4:22 PM
Great write Sandra..Congrats on your win
Haight Avatar
April 9, 2018 at 2:38 PM
Thank you so much, Joseph, for visiting my poem and for your positive comment and congrats! Sandra
Warrior Avatar
April 6, 2018 at 12:37 PM
Congrats!!! Sandra, my dear and talented friend...death should take notes lol...stay in the light...^WW^
Haight Avatar
April 9, 2018 at 2:37 PM
Thank you very much, ^WW^, for your visit and uplifting comments and congrats! Much appreciated. Sandra
Cunningham Avatar
April 6, 2018 at 10:02 AM
Life and death intertwined from our first breath. You done this very well Sandra . Congratulations. Tom.
Haight Avatar
April 9, 2018 at 2:37 PM
Thank you very much, Tom, for reading my poem and for your supportive comment and congratulations. Sandra
Ashley Avatar
February 10, 2018 at 1:51 PM
Returning with a big congrats Sandra for you excellent poem. it was a pleasure to read this lovely piece again. Warmest wishes. ~Susan
Roper Avatar
February 8, 2018 at 11:11 PM
Congratulations on your win, Sandra ! Great choice. Hugs Eve ~`*
Gauthier Avatar
February 5, 2018 at 10:01 PM
What a lovely poem that just exudes an overwhelming sensation of peace. Just had to FAVE it. Thank you, Sandra.
Haight Avatar
February 6, 2018 at 4:56 PM
Thank you so much, Line, for your lovely comments and for the fave! I appreciate it so much. Hugs, Sandra
One Avatar
February 5, 2018 at 4:39 PM
A subject we can all relate to Sandra.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest, I am happy you entered and the poem will be showcased..
Haight Avatar
February 6, 2018 at 4:55 PM
Thank you for offering this contest, Silent One. I appreciate my placement and ability to share it with others again, as well as to read all the other fine poems on your winners' list. Sandra
Gauthier Avatar
November 18, 2017 at 8:22 PM
Congrats on your win, Sandra.
Haight Avatar
February 6, 2018 at 4:53 PM
Thank you, Line. Hugs, Sandra
George   Avatar
November 16, 2017 at 2:06 PM
This is my number one pick, Sandra. Absolutely top-notch. Many congrats on a masterpiece of writing. Sincerely, Elaine
Haight Avatar
November 19, 2017 at 5:15 PM
Hi, Elaine. Thank you so much for your visit and uplifting and encouraging comments! Much appreciated. Hugs, Sandra
Medders Tobechi Avatar
November 14, 2017 at 9:10 AM
A true thought in every line with skilled blank verse. The ending is wonderful in that it leaves the one with hope. Congratulations! Sometimes, we fail to see the greatness in front of us.
Haight Avatar
November 19, 2017 at 5:14 PM
Hi, Janis, thank you so much for your very supportive and uplifting comments. I am pleased that you enjoyed reading my poem. Hugs, Sandra
Inman Avatar
November 14, 2017 at 1:43 AM
Sadly lovely with a positive ending Sandra.
Haight Avatar
November 19, 2017 at 5:12 PM
Thank you so much, James. I appreciate your visit and uplifting comments.
Lawless Avatar
November 13, 2017 at 6:18 PM
a beautiful weaving of "death as partner in the cycles of life". Well done Sandra
Haight Avatar
November 19, 2017 at 5:11 PM
Thank you very much, John, for your visit and supportive comments. Sandra
Carmack Avatar
November 13, 2017 at 1:16 PM
Good to see one of my favorite writers on the list. Love your poem and its message. Congrats Sandra.
Haight Avatar
November 19, 2017 at 5:11 PM
Aww...so sweet of you, Rob! Thanks ever so much for your visit and very supportive comments! Sandra
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November 13, 2017 at 12:07 PM
Sandra, I LOVE a poem that makes me smile and tear up simultaneously--like this masterpiece! Congrats on your win! Janice
Haight Avatar
November 19, 2017 at 5:10 PM
Hi, Janice, thank you so much for your uplifting comment and congrats! I appreciate it so much. Hugs, Sandra
Ashley Avatar
October 21, 2017 at 10:15 PM
Such a wonderfully written and thoughtful poem Sandra about life's inevitable end. Your first two lines are stunning and sets the stage nicely for your following lines on the theme of death. Though it's dark subject matter, you write your poem with light and beauty. Good luck in the contest!
Haight Avatar
October 22, 2017 at 5:15 PM
Susan, that you very much for your lovely and uplifting comment about this poem. I so much appreciate your visits and support! Hugs, Sandra
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